i know.- Poem

[gentlegiant]

i know, it seems unfair!
to you,
when theres all these trials to go through,
and everybdoy else,
is having a grand time,
all these things are tough,
but i know we have the stuff,
that it takes
to break,
through,
all the troubles that try to stop us,
like wehn you're little,
theres a scary school bus,
but you realize,
you must get on,
or you will be left to walk,
to walk the long road, to school.

but theres something else,
something that you're missing,
i know,
that you're probably wishing,
that this would be changed,
that you wouldnt have to run,
from people that seem deranged,
THEY'RE AFTER YOU!,
well, maybe they're not,
but thats something, that you never thought,
try to pull through,
and remember,
gods there for you!.

-thanx-

 

[gentlegiant]

so, what do u think?
im open for any thoughts.
...im not catholic, but...im praying someone shall like this.

 

[brinny]

I love it. My fav'rite part is this one:

that you wouldnt have to run,
from people that seem deranged,
THEY'RE AFTER YOU!,

It tweaked my funny bone and the visual on it was tooo funn-ny. You're good. Spontaneous thought is priceless. Keep on keepin' on,

Brenda

 

[gentlegiant]

thanx!
i like just sitting there and...writing.
its a habit...i guess.
perhaps its a good habit though.