God Will Give Me Justice-ADD-ON STORY!

CJF · Sep 29, 2002

PLOT: For ten years, England has been ruled by an evil King. Now that the King has died, his eldest son must take over the throne. His son has the same evil intentions his father did. Taxes to high to pay, being sent of to a prison if you can't pay them. But, the King's youngest son, Edward, has a desire to right the wrongs his father did. But, being that he is the youngest, he will not be able to do so. There is only one way to beat this evil King; not with a sword, now bow, nor fire, nor any magic of any kind, but with God's Justice. People who do not pay their taxes, get sent to the Isalnd, Chatue d'IF. There, they are kept until they die. It was meant for murderers, theifs and traitors to go, but they turrned into a place where they send peasents who cannot afford to pay their taxes.

RULES:

1. No cussing
2. No sexual things
3. Romance is allowed
4. Some gore is allowed
5. Magic is allowed, but those who have it, must use it for evil. Unless your person(s) is saved, then it is used as a God given gift.
6. No killing another persons character, unless they say you can
7. This is fantasy, so elves, dwarves and such things, are allowed.
8. have fun!

NAME: Christiana(Chris-tea-on-uh) Ithildin(Ee-th-eel-deen)
AGE:19
GENDER: Female
RACE: Human
DESCRIPTION:

PERSONALITY: Friendly, kind. She has a long lasting temper. But is sensitive when it comes to certain things.
WEAPONS: Sword, knives
TRANSPORTATION: A brown mare named Jossy.
BIOGRAPHY: She's a maid to a Countess. (Someone can play the countess)
She was once engaged to a young man, but he was arrested for not paying his taxes and was sent to the Chatue d'If.

Kookaburra · Sep 30, 2002

Um, I'll try and join...no guarentees...I'm SO tired...thinking dinos...thinking add on...toxic mixture...thinking egyptian for some reason...delarious...ranting...voices...talking...ah! I can't stand it...must...sleep...villian...LOTR...sixth time...going...crazy...sleep....

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Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

Hmmm... I might be a villian... Bwahahaha I seem to almost always be the good guy... (exept in starwars storys ) I'll think up a bio during school

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Lol, kookaburra. You don't have to join. I just haven't made an add-on for a while, I had to.

Hey X! Haven't seen you on any add-on's in a while. Welcome back!

My next post will be the beginning of the story.

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Christiana opened her eyes to a dark room. She rolled out of her bed, dressed into a soft colored dress.

(the third one on the right. Just the dress though.) She brushed her dark hair, and put it up in a braided bun. She walked outside, just as the sun was rising, and shinning it's light on the small town of Dunland, for which her mistress, The Countess of Dunland, ruled. She finished her morning chores, and went to wake the Countess from her sleep.

As the sun rose over the mountains surrounding the small city of Dunland, a horse and a rider could be seen galloping thorugh the open fields. The rider's clothes were rich in color and in fabric. His robe was a dark magenta color, trimed with a gold fabric. His shirt mached the color of his robe, and his pants were black. He wore a silver belt, with a small emerald in the middle of the belt. His riding gloves her dark brown. His short hair, was flying behind him, and his small goatee around his mouth was trimed neatly. He was almost to Dunland. And when he got there, he would work on his revenge.

Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

Or I might be one of those characters that the other characters don't quite trust

Name: Kinson Trefenwyd (Treffenwood)
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 165 lbs.
Eyes: green
Race: Human
Weapons: Throwing knives, short sword, and he can use a bow (doesn't own one though)
Transportation: None
Description: A worn out brown jacket covers his belt lined with small throwing knifes, he looks scruffy and has a few holes in his pants, and has dirty, messed up light brown hair
Personality: Not very trusting as he's been double crossed many times
Biography: Is flat broke but is very good at avoiding the Kings men when they try to arrest him

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Sweet character.

Christiana walked up to the countesses room. She knocked on the door.
"M'lady, tis time to get up." she said, and opened the door. The countess De'Winter walked into the main room, from another one.
"I'm sorry Chris. I couldn't stay in bed, so I decided to get up." she said.
"M'lady, you do not need to apologize to me. I am merely a maid. You may get up when you please." Christiana said.

The rider rode into the Dunland, and dismounted his black horse. He smiled at the sight of Dunland. He led his horse around the town. He inspected a few things, but did not buy anything from the shops. Suddenly, he saw maiden walk out of an ally. She stopped and looked around. Their gaze met momentarily, until she continued walking. Small tears formed in his eyes. He quickly wiped them away, mounted his horse and went to his new estate.

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Are you going to post, or should I post?

Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

 Kinson ran down a small ally, dodging people and boxes, glancing back every now and then to see his pursuer catching up with him.

 He jumped over a small box and a thought ran though his mind, 'I can't outrun him, he's got a horse! Looks like I'm finally done for!' just as he finished thinking that thought he stumbled into the street to almost be trampled by a horse, he dodged out of the way of the horse just in time and looked up at the rider.

 While Kinson was shouting at the rider for almost hitting him, the Kings Man burst out from the ally.

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

The rider, turrned his head, when he heard some comotion behind him. He saw a man, dressed very ruggedly, torn clothes and such, being surrounded by the King's guards. The rider, took out his bow, from a pouch on his saddle. He strung it, and shot a rider in the back. The other three giards looked up. Two charged, while the other kept the other guy from getting away. The rider shot both guards quicker than sight allowed. The remaining guard was out of his mind, because he charged, and was soon on the ground with the other guards. 'Rider' walked up to the guy being held captive.
"You must be very valubal if you have the King's men chasing you." the rider said.

Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

 Kinson laughed, "Valuable? Not really, I'm just broke, they're after me because I can't pay the taxes," he sighed and continued, making a fist, "I wish I could get two moments alone with that King... Hey, wait a moment!" He finally realized what happened, and became suspicious of this rider, "Why did you save me anyway? What do you want from me?"

(Told you he doesn't trust anyone )

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Rider smiled, and said, "I don't want anything from you. I know how the King is sending innocent people to the Cheatue d'If if they can't pay their taxes, so I'm just helping innocent people like you, become someone in the world. And today is your lucky day. I just got back from the Island of Nomblar, helping the natives there. I would like to offer you an invitation to stay at my estate for a while."
"And who are you?"
"The Count of Numblar. Count Dontarz."

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

BUMPing up my post!

Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

Kinson crossed his arms, "you did save me, that does get you some of my respect," he sighed slightly, "and I haven't had much to eat lately, I just don't believe it's true there's some one like you in these times..." he reluctantly nodded and said quietly, "I'll come I suppose, the name's Kinson..."

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Count Duntarz smiled, and extended his hand. Kinson reluctantly shook it.
"Come," Dontarz said, and led Kinson through the town, and down a small path and to a huge estate surrounded by trees, but quite noticable. Dontarz led him inside. A servent met Dontarz inside.
"A letter came for you today sir."
"Thank you Charles. Get dinner ready, and get this lad some clean clothes."
"Yes sir." Charles said, and led Kinson to a room where he was given some clean clothes. He was then led to a huge dining hall, and was given a chair next to Dontarz.

Boy Wonder · Sep 30, 2002

Kinson looked down at his new clothes again then around the dining hall. "So, your a Count, eh? Nice place..." He sighed and sit in the chair, "I suppose I won't be bothered by those guards again for a while will I?" he smiled to himself and chuckled (it's the best he can muster up for being such a stranger to these surroundings) for joy.

(By the way to any who read this, we could use some more people, don't feel like ya have to, but I'd be nice... Just FYI)

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

Dontarz talked with Kinson while they ate. After they were done eating, Dontarz asked, "Do you want to go for a walk?" Kinson agreed, and they walked around the perimeter of the estate. They talked about various things. They went in just after the sun had set. Kinson went to bed imediatly. Dontarz got his letter, and read it. Someone wanted to meet him. He went to the spot the letter said to go to. He waited for about ten minutes before a young woman appeard from the shadows. Dontarz bowed. "M'lady. How may I be of service to you?" he asked.
"Sir, I have been told that you know various people that are being held captive in the Cheatue d'If?"
"I do."
"Do you know a man by the name of Edmond Donter?" she asked.
"I do."
"How is he?" she asked.
"Well, five years in the Cheatue d'If was torture, but he's alive." Dontarz said.
"Do have anyway of giving this letter to him?"
"I do."
"Would you get this to him please? It's quite ergent."
"Yes ma'am."
"Thank you ever so much." she said, and she walked off.

Blessed-one · Sep 30, 2002

sorry... mind's empty.

Kookaburra · Sep 30, 2002

I'm joining! With two chars. And also...Darrions...I'm going to pm you again with an idea....

NAME: Jazper 'Jaz' Manzrique
AGE: almost 20
HEIGHT: 5'9
DESCRIPTION: very light brown eyes, very dark brown hair, tanned skin, good posture.
ANCESTRY: Spanish
PERSONALITY: proud but not arrogant, stubborn. She's kind and gentle, but has a streak of mischief in her. She's elegent when required, and a wonderful fighter when not.
HISTORY: daughter of a 'dethroned' countess ( for unknown reasons ), she's relatively poor but proud and not about to serve the new count or countess.
WEAPONS: fine, egraved longbow that's bound with silver, a heirloom of her deceased father, with matching shortsword and quiver of arrows. She has several knives hidden among her things, and one of them is poisoned.
TRANSPORT: a fine gelding--Devador--and a young filly--Tres Zapatos.
STATUS: En route to Cheatue D'if

CJF · Sep 30, 2002

NAME: Lavinya(La-vin-yuh) Donter
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION:

PERSONALITY: She's friendly, but can be very emotional. She makes friends easily, and has very little enamys. Her biggest enamy...is the King.
WEAPONS: a silver sword, two gold knives
TRANSPORTATION: A soft grey colored horse by the name of Shadow.
BIO: She's a younger sibling to Edmond Donter who was sent to the Cheatue d'If for not being able to pay his taxes.
STATUS: En route to the Cheatue d'If along with Jazper.

God Will Give Me Justice-ADD-ON STORY!

...love alters not...

searching for The Hidden Country

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

...love alters not...

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

...love alters not...

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

...love alters not...

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

No longer a boy.. =P

...love alters not...

a long journey ahead

searching for The Hidden Country

...love alters not...

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