Editors?

[dysert]

Hi. I'm wondering if there any volunteer editors hanging out here? The reason I ask is because I have a first draft of a book I wrote that I'd like to have edited. The book is a commentary on the book of Revelation, but I'm not looking for anyone to assess it theologically. I'm strictly interested in the book's "structure". Things like:

• It flows well
• It's understandable
• It makes sense and is easy to read
• The heading numbers make sense
• The cross-references are accurate
• There's no section that needs to be beefed up (or pared down)
• There's nothing I missed
• It's internally consistent
• Whatever else you want to do

The book is about 125 pages and I currently have it in MS Word. Is there anyone with the time and desire to run my book through an editor's eyes?

Thanks!