crashing

[daddyzgurl7]

walls crashing down,no not in real life but inside.In who can i confide,im letting it go...my life to whom? the Christ,before i saw darkness and void,almost like a blur,i know you know this feeling u should concur,now seeing the light,with my sheperd's might,i can see,he who created me.


how was that

 

[Quixotic the Pedestrian]

hey it's pretty good, keep writing and posting stuff.

 

[Godsgirl481]

good...but seperate it like a poem...it would look and flow much better