Could Someone Critique My Work?

[CalledOutOne]

It would be most helpful if you could.
Here is a link to a chapter of a book I'm writing for the students at my church.
Understanding the Fall of Mankind

 

[James1979]

It's pretty good overall. There are a few words that are misspelled so you probably won't proof read it again. Since we are on the topic of your book, what do you think about principalities, are these a separate creation that was made before us? Ephesians 3:10 seems to suggest that.

 

[CalledOutOne]

I believe that the powers and principalities are angelic beings on thrones in heaven. I believe that some of these principalities are fallen with Satan.