Can you find any errors??

[Ainur]

Hello everyone...
I'm not a native English speaker (I'm from Brazil!), but a friend of mine asked me if I could translate the abstract of her final research into English. So I did, but as a non-native speaker I'm asking you guys for a favor if you can find any grammar/spelling/"doesn't sound good"/whatever errors in this text!
This is it:

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]ABSTRACT
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[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The following research consists of a special view unto the visual impairment, particularly unto acquired blindness. Concernment upon this theme comes from the need of a more profound study of the longings, expectations and capabilities of the blind people, those who we meet in a day-to-day basis but cannot support; we are not really able to live together with them, respecting them according to their limitations and potentialities. Therefore, the goal of this survey is to study how people with acquired blindness arrange their psychological functions to reach autonomy and social insertion. Grounded on that, we seek subsides to understand the rehabilitation and readaptation process of the people who lose their sight during a certain time of their lives. We have chosen the qualitative research method for this study, including a case study. The analysis started over the crossing of the research sources, consisting of of interviews with acquired blindness patients and their relatives, which made possible a collation with the surveyed authors. The theoretical foundation of this research is centered on the approach of Thomas J. Carrol[/FONT], [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Elcie F. Salzano Masini and Elizabet Dias de Sá. The conclusion presents a few answers to the conducting questions, aforementioned in the outset of this research, as well as new challenges concerning new ways of apprenticheship on the subject matter.[/FONT]

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[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Keywords: Acquired visual impairment, adult life, blindness[/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Thanks in advance!!
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[Ainustorm]

Hello everyone...
I'm not a native English speaker (I'm from Brazil!), but a friend of mine asked me if I could translate the abstract of her final research into English. So I did, but as a non-native speaker I'm asking you guys for a favor if you can find any grammar/spelling/"doesn't sound good"/whatever errors in this text!
This is it:

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]ABSTRACT[/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The following research consists of a special view unto the visual impairment, particularly unto acquired blindness. Concernment upon this theme comes from the need of a more profound study of the longings, expectations and capabilities of the blind people, those who we meet in a day-to-day basis but cannot support; we are not really able to live together with them, respecting them according to their limitations and potentialities. Therefore, the goal of this survey is to study how people with acquired blindness arrange their psychological functions to reach autonomy and social insertion. Grounded on that, we seek subsides to understand the rehabilitation and readaptation process of the people who lose their sight during a certain time of their lives. We have chosen the qualitative research method for this study, including a case study. The analysis started over the crossing of the research sources, consisting of of interviews with acquired blindness patients and their relatives, which made possible a collation with the surveyed authors. The theoretical foundation of this research is centered on the approach of Thomas J. Carrol[/FONT], [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Elcie F. Salzano Masini and Elizabet Dias de Sá. The conclusion presents a few answers to the conducting questions, aforementioned in the outset of this research, as well as new challenges concerning new ways of apprenticheship on the subject matter.[/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Keywords: Acquired visual impairment, adult life, blindness[/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Thanks in advance!![/FONT]

All i can see is you used "of of" twice, use one "of". I put it in red above. Otherwise everything seems to be proper english, lol. You translated very well, God Bless

 

[CelticRose]

into instead of unto. social intergration rather than social insertion.

You've done a good job.

 

[Jane_the_Bane]

integration, not intergration.

 

[Zigarrote]

"The following research consists of a special view unto [INTO] the visual impairment, particularly unto [INTO] acquired blindness. Concernment upon [ABOUT] this theme comes from the need of [FOR] a more profound study of the longings, expectations and capabilities of the [Drop the "the"] blind people, those who we meet in [ON] a day-to-day basis but cannot support; we are not really able to live together with them, respecting them according to their limitations and potentialities. Therefore, the goal of this survey is to study how people with acquired blindness arrange their psychological functions to reach autonomy and social insertion [INTEGRATION]. Grounded on that, we seek subsides [SUBSIDIES?] to understand the rehabilitation and readaptation process of the people who lose their sight during a certain time of their lives. We have chosen the qualitative research method for this study, including a case study. The analysis started over the crossing of the research sources, consisting of of interviews with acquired blindness patients and their relatives, which made possible a collation [COLLABORATION?] with the surveyed authors. The theoretical foundation of this research is centered on the approach of Thomas J. Carrol, Elcie F. Salzano Masini and Elizabet Dias de Sá. The conclusion presents a few answers to the conducting questions, aforementioned in the outset of this research, as well as new challenges concerning new ways of apprenticheship on the subject matter."

 

[NavyGuy7]

Actually Zigarrote, the "Concernment upon..." sentence is just fine in the beginning. No need to change it to ABOUT. Upon sounds fine. But I don't know, i'm just going on grammar gut instinct (which isn't ALWAYS correct)

 

[Zigarrote]

NavyGuy, I'm glad you pointed that out. Actually, I meant not only to change "upon" to "about", but also to recommend he drop the "-ment" off the end of Concern, as "concernment" is not a word as far as I'm aware. Still, that is just one man's take. I'm usually right, tho