American Federation Command Center

[Soldier_For_Christ]

Here, you can talk about and comment on the American Federation of Galaxies story that I have running. I have chapters 1 and 2 complete. Oh, and they are based on a lot of Sci-Fi movies and games.

 

[Soldier_For_Christ]

Chapter 3 is out! Please tell what'cha think!

 

[HisKnight]

Not too bad, could use some more characters and developement of them.

 

[Soldier_For_Christ]

Sorry it took so long, but I now have Chapter 4 out. As for what you said, HisKnight, I'm afraid that I came up with the framework for this when I was about 7 years old. Never took into account use of heroes or anything. To be truthful, I came up with the name of the President by deciding that a really good friend of mine would eventually become President, so I kinda picked out his name and stuck it into the story .