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[Paul_Wright_luvr]

each person will write a paragraph or so and then another person will continue. here's my paragraph:

Tara breathed hard as she ran. She was terrified, her imagination getting carried away as she imagined what was chasing her. She was a 16 year old girl and very athletic but even she couldn't handle this much running. Finally a gas station came into view and she dashed inside. She looked behind her to see if the person followed her in and, to her relief, it was only her best friend Charmelle. "Man, you run fast," Charmelle panted "what's with you these day? You're so jumpy." "Nothing," Tara replied quickly "i gotta go home. See ya tomarrow." And she headed home.

 

[goldenviolet]

Tara breathed hard as she ran. She was terrified, her imagination getting carried away as she imagined what was chasing her. She was a 16 year old girl and very athletic but even she couldn't handle this much running. Finally a gas station came into view and she dashed inside. She looked behind her to see if the person followed her in and, to her relief, it was only her best friend Charmelle. "Man, you run fast," Charmelle panted "what's with you these day? You're so jumpy." "Nothing," Tara replied quickly "i gotta go home. See ya tomarrow." And she headed home.....
There it was again. Something unknown chasing her, looming dangerously without reason. Thrown into panic Tara began running again. Her brain Raced. Why didn't she stay at the gas station? why had she brushed her best friend off? How much longer could she run?

 

[I've Got a Secret]

Tara breathed hard as she ran. She was terrified, her imagination getting carried away as she imagined what was chasing her. She was a 16 year old girl and very athletic but even she couldn't handle this much running. Finally a gas station came into view and she dashed inside. She looked behind her to see if the person followed her in and, to her relief, it was only her best friend Charmelle. "Man, you run fast," Charmelle panted "what's with you these day? You're so jumpy." "Nothing," Tara replied quickly "i gotta go home. See ya tomarrow." And she headed home.....
There it was again. Something unknown chasing her, looming dangerously without reason. Thrown into panic Tara began running again. Her brain Raced. Why didn't she stay at the gas station? why had she brushed her best friend off? How much longer could she run?
She began to gasp as she ran. Moments later her lungs began to burn and her paced slowed. Tara grasped at her chest as she fell to her knees on the hot pavement. Whatever it was that had been following her had nearly caught up.

 

[Mebby01]

Tara breathed hard as she ran. She was terrified, her imagination getting carried away as she imagined what was chasing her. She was a 16 year old girl and very athletic but even she couldn't handle this much running. Finally a gas station came into view and she dashed inside. She looked behind her to see if the person followed her in and, to her relief, it was only her best friend Charmelle. "Man, you run fast," Charmelle panted "what's with you these day? You're so jumpy." "Nothing," Tara replied quickly "i gotta go home. See ya tomarrow." And she headed home
There it was again. Something unknown chasing her, looming dangerously without reason. Thrown into panic Tara began running again. Her brain Raced. Why didn't she stay at the gas station? why had she brushed her best friend off? How much longer could she run?
She began to gasp as she ran. Moments later her lungs began to burn and her paced slowed. Tara grasped at her chest as she fell to her knees on the hot pavement. Whatever it was that had been following her had nearly caught up.
She looked behind it was her boyfriend Zach she stoped and he offered her some water since she was running for so long he was saying how much he cared for her and l loved her. They have been dating for 3 years now she trusted him it wasn't until 5 minutes later her boyfriend said he had to go. It was then she felt dizzy and sick and just passed out. He never loved her he druged her