a song i wrote- tell me what you think

[evenangelsfall]

these are the lyrics to my first christian song iv ever written im really proud of the sentiment of it please tel me what you think

I know that you will always be there
so i am taking controll
trying to rebuild this empty void
take back what he stole

and every breath you give me makes me hopeful
and every word i read is my sword
yes every breath you give me makes me hopeful
and every word i read is my sword

untill you take take me home

I know this darkness will be light
and this saddness will be joy
for your spirit is within me
whom shall i fear

all i need to know is your my saviour
yea the only thing that matters
yes all i need to know is your my saviour
yea the only thing that matters

untill you take me take me home

 

[irenemcg]

Cool , keep writing! God bless you!

 

[sphsjags]

Awesome!

 

[xPJJx]

cool, I like it

 

[mightywarrior77]

these are the lyrics to my first christian song iv ever written im really proud of the sentiment of it please tel me what you think

I know that you will always be there
so i am taking controll
trying to rebuild this empty void
take back what he stole

and every breath you give me makes me hopeful
and every word i read is my sword
yes every breath you give me makes me hopeful
and every word i read is my sword

untill you take take me home

I know this darkness will be light
and this saddness will be joy
for your spirit is within me
whom shall i fear

all i need to know is your my saviour
yea the only thing that matters
yes all i need to know is your my saviour
yea the only thing that matters

untill you take me take me home

Hi, I am MW, it is nice, do you have music to go with it? When I write a song I usually get the music with it also!

 

[mrbrownie0jesusrocks]

Hmm.... not to long....but it's good.......

 

[evenangelsfall]

Hi, I am MW, it is nice, do you have music to go with it? When I write a song I usually get the music with it also!

yea the chords are c g minor something lol i cant remember now id know if i had a guitar with me