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A Short Story by Dave...

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What a plain and ordinary day it was. The sun was shining, clouds sparesly populated the sky, cars were tightly packed into the road... and life hung in the balance at Christus Lux Hospital.

People were living, and people were dying, meeting and breaking expectations. Families celebrated and prayed in thanks to many gods, while others cried out in agony, cast anger heavenward, or waited nervously to hear just what the bad news was.

But for the reader's sake, only one patient is to be mentioned for now. A young boy of only 4, William Kramer, had been in a tragic accident. Like many of the patients at Christus Lux, it had been an automobile accident. He had been playing near the street, not in it, but for some reason unknown to the world, the driver had fallen asleep at the wheel and veered into the Kramers' front yard.

With his life now in the balance, his mother waited anxiously by his bedside. A few relatives that lived nearby were on there way, and Mr. Kramer had left to wait for them downstairs while the Mrs. watched her son dangle by life-support machines, little to nothing on her mind but fear that William might not survive.


But William had another visitor en route... one who frequented this hospital. Every day, in fact, he was summoned to this place of life and death, of joyful praise and mournful wails. ... And he hated it. But he could not deny his duty; he would never forsake his position, his dignity, or his exclusive, perpetual task. He would trade nothing for the honor it was to serve God as the Angel of Death.

Wearily, it seemed, the untiring being soared through the midday air, unseen by mortal eyes as his dark, empty black hood remained fixed on Christus Lux. While his heavy armor gleamed white with his purity of being and essence as one of the faithful servants of the Lord, it only barely outshone the darkness of the black skirting robes that covered him beneath his breastplate. Over said armor he wore a white sash, but it was torn open down the middle, smudged and stained with ashes. On his large shoulder pauldrons, the only adournment was the black image of a cross atop a gravestone.

He had the look of a mourner, through and through. His face, if he had one, was completely shrouded by his hood, but even that seemed to be warped into a deep, despaired frown, with a black, unending hole where a human's face might be. Had he the bodily means to cry, the Angel of Death would have flooded the earth with tears long before his exploits, recorded in the book of Exodus. Every soul that left this earth, he was the guide and companion for. His scythe cut them down, his long arm and cold hand led them to the next world, and his heart ached for the wake of pain and emptiness each death left... or for the lack thereof, in the cases of the unloveable, lonely, secluded people he often mercifully released from life. And worst of all, it was his hand that delivered God's children to judgement, where he watched so, so many fall down the same path of the Betrayers, the Unfaithful, the Adversaries... the Demons.


Ceaseless, that was his job description in every aspect. For all eternity, he would exist. And until the end of the world, he would be forced to spend his existence as death's icy, unforgiving hand. But let there be no mistake... it may have been a repetitive action in concept, but he rarely went unopposed.

Always, Demons had tried to stop the Angel of Death in his duty of fulfilling the Plan. But now, in this day and age, God's Children unknowingly assisted them in their rebellion; in fact, the Angel felt more like humans resisted death more strongly than the Demons! Especially those whom the Angel loathed to visit... those who had no reassurance beyond the grave.

Today, though, the Angel of Death would face both spirit and flesh before his duty could be carried out. William Kramer was a young boy, always so happy, always so full of life, always bringing a smile to the face of anyone who came his way. But much to the Angel's despair, he would not stay like that. An experiment with various drugs would result in many youthful years at a military school, compliments of Mr. Kramer. When William leaves, he will be a different man. To make a long life's story significantly shorter, he would rise to power and completely debautcherize every law that governed the country's administration and become the world's next despot. His persecutions of the Faithful and his world-wide murder of so many unsaved souls would not be acceptable. And so, the Angel of Death had been sent to ensure that William Kramer left behind only good memories and a loving family.


((I need to stop for a while now, but I will keep this going tomorrow.:) I hope you guys are enjoying this so far, and I promise it will pick up in the next post. The events in this story are all just concepts, and the Angel's role is not a Biblical truth that I know of; just a concept. This story has no agenda, and is not meant to defame life-support in hospitals or anything.))
 

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((Glad you guys like it!:) Thank you all very much! And yes, just for you, I will indent. Don't you feel special?:D;)))

The Angel's proverbial heart ached for young William. Even as one who knew the boy's place in the Plan, the Angel could not help but feel like it was not the best action to take. But then again, so did the humans, who could only see so far... and the Angel knew full well how short-sighted they were; how short sighted HE was. But he also knew better. He knew what became of those who questioned... of those who disobeyed... of those who rebelled... those who became Adversaries. Those who fell.

There, all over the streets, in homes and buildings, and especially in Christus Lux. Demons, everywhere. They whispered lies into the ears of God's Children, they tried to manipulate the mundane, and all over creation, they were virtually locked in a bitter stalemate with the Angels who had remained loyal. The Demons were wily, and had no need to wait for orders before acting. But despite their superior numbers and strength, the Angels had to do only as they were told, and continue their vigilant watch and valiant defense of their charges.

Today, though, a few Angels were feeling renewed eagerness and enthusiasm. They were not one of the many at Christus Lux, keeping close watch on the disdainful Demons who glared venomously at them as the tainted beings went about their evil devices, ever-so careful to remain just barely out of the influence of the Angels' charges. No; while they watched eagerly, it was the three Angels who hovered just a few hundred yards from the Hospital, awaiting the Angel of Death.

The one placed in charge of the small detachment wore a white hood, from which shone a light that was nigh blinding to the eyes of mortals. He wore heavy plate armor on his torso, with a crimson cross adorning his chest and the assymetrically large pauldron on his right shoulder. His wings and the white robes beneath his armor glowed with irradiant holy light, and his armor shone like the midday sun. A massive sword was held in his powerful gauntleted hands, and his hood was eagerly facing up towards the approaching Angel of Death.

Behind him were two others, in similar dress. One wore a great helm, rather than a hood, but his face remained hidden. A raging, fiery light poured forth from the openings in his helmet, irradiating the passionate zeal and righteous fury that he fought with. In his hands were a gleaming silver warhammer, with the word Judgement etched in the holy tongue that his kind spoke across the head, and a tower shield in the other, with a golden cross emblazoning it. Written on the cross was Faith, and the Angel was dressed in full, heavy, intimidating armor; darker than the leader's, but still exhuding the bright fiery light of the Angel's fury from every oriface and opening.

To this Angel's right was another heavenly warrior, dressed in white armor and crimson robes. He too wore a hood that hid his Angelic visage, and his armor was visible only on his torso. His blood red robes covered everything else. They were lined with pure, spotless white trim, and gold crosses shimmered on his shoulders and over his left breast. In his armored hands was a halberd, perfect and elegant in form. His wings were unlike the others': rather than being in the image that the Creator placed on the birds of the sky, his were like white strips of fabric, longer than he was tall, and glowing with pure and holy light as they floated autonomously, but still held two winglike shapes.

All of these beings were dressed and armed in a way that no mortal words could do justice. To put it simply, they were other-worldy, they were beautiful, they were terrible, and they were powerful.


The one with a white hood flew up to meet the Angel of Death and pounded his fist over his breastplate, bowing his head as he hovered to a stop. "Greetings, mighty liberator of the Slaves. " he greeted. "I, Kanrael, and my comrades, Ignatael," he pointed to the Angel who poured fourth the fiery light, who clanged his hammer against his shield and nodded, "And Shemael," Kanrael pointed to the one in the blood red robes, who humbly bowed his head to the Angel of Death. "have come with the honorable comission of escorting you to your objective, comrade. Command us, and we shall combat the Fallen for the Glory of the Almighty Sovereign!"

Ignatael roared in agreement, and Shemael nodded. Kanrael looked up to the Angel of Death, awaiting his orders with baited breath.


The Angel of Death solemnly looked forward, towards Christus Lux, and the room where he knew his victim awaited. He could also see Demons... and plenty of them. A dozen atleast. The Enemy was fighting hard today... the Angel had to be sure that he and his comrades fought harder. With an air of grim, servantile dutifulness, the Angel of Death held his mighty scythe upright, and raised his left hand in the room's direction. "...Go forth," he said darkly. "Let us fulfill our directive this day. We are without Prayer support, but we remain stronger than our foes. Show no mercy, and spare no fury. May the Father grant us victory!"

With a mighty, earth-shaking shout, the detachment of Angels began their charge, wingbeats resounding as the demons that guarded the hospital room drew swords and awaited their foes.


((I'm gonna call it quits for now. I'll try and write the battle tomorrow night, but as I showed last time, I shouldn't make any promises.:doh: ))
 
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"Don't let them near!" A Demon barked, snarling as he pointed at the oncoming Angels. The Demon was the one placed in command of William's protection from the Angel of Death. Other Demons were en route to defend the room, but they were far away from the Hospital, and Angels had also been sent to harass and impede their flight. This Demonic commander would have to hold his own against 4 incredibly powerful Angels until reinforcements arrived, if he and his Fallen brethren were to succeed in defying the Plan.

The Commander looked somewhat like a human. He had pure, moon-white skin, and flowing, glossy black hair. He was beautiful in a way that only the Angels could be; but at the same time, it was marred. His eyes were reptilian, and blood red in color. His hands had talons on the ends of his fingers, and sharp teeth filled his mouth. His wings were like that of a bird, but the feathers were black and mottled. The Demon wore elegant and flashy black robes, with intricate gold trim and bands of rich purple on the bottom of his sleaves and down the center of his front. On a chain belt that hung loosely from his hips was a long, curved blade, similar to that of the Japanese Katana. It was as long as Kanrael's two-handed sword, but not as heavy. Although... with beings as strong as Angels and Demons, weight of a weapon rarely made much of a difference.

But it was not his intent to face the Angels. In the hand he was not using to point out his orders, he held a barbed whip, which he lashed against the nearest Demon. "GO!" the Commander raged. "Keep them away from the boy! I'll flay you as soon as you are reincarnated, should you wretches fail!"

The Demons under his command needed no further encouragement. The burly, black-skinned, armor-laden demon who's bare leg had just been scourged by the whip cried out and fearfully took his position in front of the bed, manifesting a great-axe of flames in his ruby-like claws.


4 more Demonic warriors roared out and drew their weapons as they charged the oncoming Angels, ready to sell their temporary bodies and buy time for their commander. The one in front, who had the appearance of a black, spiked monster with leathery wings, had a mane of fire on his shoulders, back, and chest, and talons that easily measured 3 feet in length grew on its massive hands. His eyes were orange, and without a pupil or iris, giving them a soulless and animalistic look as the Demon assailed Kanrael, who led the pack of Angels.


Kanrael and the black Demon clashed in a great clamour of heavenly steel and demonic claws. Kanrael had swung his mighty greatsword in flight, carving a horizontal arc in the air, but the Demon's talons were apparently strong enough to withstand and catch the blade. Acting quickly, Kanrael came to a quick halt as he passed the Demon, then turned about and reversed his flight pattern in a flurry of winbeats. With only one hand struggling to keep his sword in his own grip, rather than the Demons, Kanrael was able to throw a punch to the beast's hideous, fang-filled maw.

The Demon reeled and released Kanrael's blade, at which point the Angel immediately thrust his Greatsword into the Demon's chest. With a great effort, Kanrael's upper body bulged with power as he swung his left arm, the one that held the sword's hilt, and tore it straight out through the Demon's side, leaving a massive gash in the being and severing its spine. The Demon wailed in terrible agony and suffering as it fell from the sky and its flames died down, burning out into smoking embers in his flesh.

As the Demon slammed against the ground, his flesh quickly began to decay away, leaving nothing but a malformed skeleton. Then, even this was turned to dust, and the creature was sent to the Abyss in which the Fallen lurked. Before long, he would return to the job of impeding God's will with a restored body, since his spirit was eternal. Even if a Demon or Angel was physically damaged, they could not die. They would abandon their shells and be reincarnated in safety, only to return to do battle once more. However, this Demon was loathing the thought of returning, due to the Commander's threat of flaying those who failed.



With the Demon dead, Kanrael turned and looked back to Christus Lux as he hovered in the air, watching Ignatael raise his tower shield and barrel into an armor-clad demon who wielded a wicked, Hellish scimitar and kite shield. The being was sent gliding backwards from the force of the Angel's blow, sending it back into the Hospital room as Ignatael immediately assaulted a thin, graceful-bodied Demon who had engaged Shemael. The Demon was being relentlessly hammered to death by Ignatael, and Shemael took the oppurtunity to wrap a few of the tendrils of his wings around the thing's wrists, momentarily keeping it from fighting back.

As Ignatael's hammer of Judgement collided with the Demon's skull, it too was sent sailing down towards the earth, its body already beginning to decay. Shemael and Ignatael watched only for a moment before looking back up to eachother and nodding in approvement. "Let us rejoin our superiors!" Ignatael yelled, his bravado soaring as he turned to see Kanrael force back another Demon with a powerful swing of his greatsword. "No more than a dozen remain now, Shemael! If we wish to partake of more Demon blood, we must make haste!"

Shemael nodded solemnly and tightened his grip on his halberd, while Ignatael threw his head back in a war cry, amplifying his fiery glow as well. The Angels resumed their advance, rushing in to aid their commander.

Three Demons were already on top of Kanrael. He had blocked a retaliation from his prior opponent, but the spear of another had almost pierced his heavy armor. But by God's grace, Kanrael had seen it coming and let go of his sword with one hand, successfully grabbing the haft. While he had saved himself, he now found himself at a disadvantage with both of his foes, and began to try to pull back.

As another Demon came forth with a flail in each hand, ready to pummel Kanrael's armor, his head suddenly found itself falling towards the earth, with the body a few feet behind. Curteousy, of course, of the Angel of Death's scythe. The Demon armed with a spear was sent reeling back into the hospital room by another shield charge from Ignatael, and with Kanrael resuming blow-trading with his original foe, that Demon was left vulnerable to Shemael's halberd(the tip of which found itself firmly embedded between the monster's shoulderblades, elliciting a roar of mortal agony before Kanrael clove it in two with his greatsword, sending it on a downward journey to join its brethren.

The Four Angels hovered in place, glaring at the remaining Demons with weapons in hand. It was quite clear now that the Demons were frightened, having just watched their comrades slaughtered with no wound to the Angelic Warriors. The Demon Commander was worried as well, but he was not yet ready to accept defeat; not so early into the game.

"What are you waiting for?!" the Commander demanded. "Keep fighting! Form up and prepare to repel them!"

The Demons eagerly obeyed, fearing his whip, and formed a gauntlet of Demonic Warriors for the Angel of Death to pass through, should he attempt to deliver William's fate to him.
 
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