I writing a book about a lone swordsman in search of the truth, the truth of existance. He weilds a magical sword, a sword that only he can carry... Not to much info, but just wait. I'm post the prolouge to the story today...
The Wandering Swordsman
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Half the things you said are horrible grammar, Jimmy. This was my idea, don't deny it, you copied me!
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Prologue-
It was night, and the stars shown beautifully. The moon laid above the grass covered plains where a man on a horse passed through. The cloaked man on the horse rode on, as if never to reach his destiny. The man was beyond any ordinary man. He was a man who longed for the truth, and would never seize until he found it. To him, the truth was more important than anything on Earth, and truth was the key to freedom to all who seek it. On his back there was a bow and quiver, and at his side an axe. Yet in his hand he held a magical sword, a legend to the rest of the world. It is called the "Destiny of Dreams " due to its confusion of either being real or just a myth. It was said to have been crafted by a Samurai who had seen many wars and had fought many battles. The sword is capable of breaking any other sword and killing ten men every swing. The curved blade is made from a metal that was forged in the fires of Mount Halhafin, the deadliest volcano on Earth. At the end of the handle there is a black, mysterious gem unearthed from the deepest man-built mine. It has a magical feature to it, and was said to possess a demon named Ranakan. He is said to be so wicked, one who looks upon him experiences everything he ever feared and then slowly dies of sorrow. Ranakans power and strength adds itself to the swing of the blade causing mass destruction. The quality of the sword is by far the best on Earth, and there is no value that could purchase the sword. The man treasures the sword dearly, and wishes to honor the craftsman who made it by defeating every monster and enemy he fights. There has been no sheath or scabbard that can bear this enchanted blade. Because of this, the only thing the man could do was to either hold it or wrap it in a cloth. The man was an excellent swordsman and could wield the sword with ease. His name was Cein, and come from a long line of knights from his native land, Foren. He rode on, and would rather die than give up his quest. He would never stop until he found the truth, the key to eternal freedom.
It was night, and the stars shown beautifully. The moon laid above the grass covered plains where a man on a horse passed through. The cloaked man on the horse rode on, as if never to reach his destiny. The man was beyond any ordinary man. He was a man who longed for the truth, and would never seize until he found it. To him, the truth was more important than anything on Earth, and truth was the key to freedom to all who seek it. On his back there was a bow and quiver, and at his side an axe. Yet in his hand he held a magical sword, a legend to the rest of the world. It is called the "Destiny of Dreams " due to its confusion of either being real or just a myth. It was said to have been crafted by a Samurai who had seen many wars and had fought many battles. The sword is capable of breaking any other sword and killing ten men every swing. The curved blade is made from a metal that was forged in the fires of Mount Halhafin, the deadliest volcano on Earth. At the end of the handle there is a black, mysterious gem unearthed from the deepest man-built mine. It has a magical feature to it, and was said to possess a demon named Ranakan. He is said to be so wicked, one who looks upon him experiences everything he ever feared and then slowly dies of sorrow. Ranakans power and strength adds itself to the swing of the blade causing mass destruction. The quality of the sword is by far the best on Earth, and there is no value that could purchase the sword. The man treasures the sword dearly, and wishes to honor the craftsman who made it by defeating every monster and enemy he fights. There has been no sheath or scabbard that can bear this enchanted blade. Because of this, the only thing the man could do was to either hold it or wrap it in a cloth. The man was an excellent swordsman and could wield the sword with ease. His name was Cein, and come from a long line of knights from his native land, Foren. He rode on, and would rather die than give up his quest. He would never stop until he found the truth, the key to eternal freedom.
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What are you talking about, Jake? This is my, "Destiny of the Seeker" idea. Remember? I thought of this, like, a month ago! Sorry, but at least you know!
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Oh, and anyone else who is actually interested in the story, just ignore this argument. We know each other so we'll be fighting in this forum aften.
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yeah, pikemen! not poke'mon! big difference! by the way, buy armor with the blessings I gave you!
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Challine doesn't have an army, they have a militia. The Captain of the militia is the only really skilled fighter. He was a soldier in an army of a much bigger kingdom called Falghan. The kingdom is nothing now due to a war that they had a little before the Kanai Saga. Demons destroid most of their army, yet the Captain was lucky to escape. The survivers scattered all over the world, becoming captains, leaders, and even lords. Well, I can't spoil the story enough, but if your interested, Chapter One will be released later on this week. Thanks.
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Yeah, this sounds like a good story, I obviously think so because I made a very similar story.
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Sounds interesting. I might read it, though my time is filled with homework and add-ons. You know, your story would be a fun add-on. It reminds me of the anime, Inuyosha.
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