Thinking of A Song

I'm thinking of writing a song about Jesus. Here are some lyrics.

Verse 1:

I'm here in this church. Just trying to pass the time. I just keep seeing with my eyes. But then the preachers starts. And I hear these new words. Then I finally realise... and I finally open my eyes...

Chorus

Jesus is my savior

Jesus is my savior

I kept thinking the way of the damned

But not anymore

'Cause Jesus has saved me


Verse 2

And now I realise. I need to get saved. And when I finally do, I start a whole new praise.
I realise Satan. I try my best to win. But then I realise... He can do all this...

Chorus 2x


:oSo, what do you think? This is my first song about my faith. In fact, it's only been the second time I wrote a song.