I would like comments about the content of the short stories at "http://short-stories-christian.angelfire.com"
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I had a quick look at a few of them. The ideas are there, but with all due respect, the authors of the stories and articles I looked at need to break up their writing to make it easier to read.
It's a bit like reading in church - in my experience the single biggest improvement most readers could make would be increased use of "pause". It breaks the reading up, and makes it more interesting and easier to listen to, and to understand. It's the same with writing, except the "pause" in writing is provided by the judicious use of punctuation and paragraphing.
Then again it may be that the website removes the paragraphs from the stories when they're submitted.
It's a bit like reading in church - in my experience the single biggest improvement most readers could make would be increased use of "pause". It breaks the reading up, and makes it more interesting and easier to listen to, and to understand. It's the same with writing, except the "pause" in writing is provided by the judicious use of punctuation and paragraphing.
Then again it may be that the website removes the paragraphs from the stories when they're submitted.
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