Actually, I can't think of anything at present. Wait, never mind. I just thought of something. I do have a recomendation. For the new character, could you give an exsample of what he'll look like? It's just easier if I know who you're wanting him to look like.
And this post, is going to be fantasy at it's extreme.
Rea and Arannte put their horses in full gallop. Arannte was very persistant that they get to the town as soon as possible. On the way there, they had very few interuptions. Until they reached a river. Rea and Arannte were half-way across, when the river started to rise.
"It's flooding!" Rea shouted over the loud rumble beneath them. Gwanthi reared, obviously spooked about the sudden rise of the water. Nightmare easily and calmly walked to shore. She turrned, and nieghed at Gwanthi as if to say it was safe. But Gwanthi wouldn't budge from his spot.
"Come on Gwanthi!" Rea said. She finally dismounted and tried leading Gwanthi out of the river, he tried to follow her, but he couldn't. Rea suddenly took a deep breath and went underwater. She came back up quickly. She garbbed her knife out of her saddle, and went buck under. At this point the water was just below her neck.
The dark greenish brown water was filled with mud from Gwanthi's hooves kicking around, trying to loosen himself free of a weed that had wrapped itself around his leg. Rea grabed ahold of the weed, and tried to cut it. But it was strong, very strong. She kept at it. Seconds went by slowly feeling like minutes. Finally, the weed snapped. Gwanthi darted away from the spot where he'd been standing. Rea swam to the surface that, had once been to her waist, and was now well over her head, if her feet were to touch the bottom. Suddenly, just as Gwanthi stepped onto dry land, a current began. The current started slow, but fast enough to startle Rea. Arannte, noticed the current as well. Her face went slightly pale.
"Rea, we need to move on. And quickly."
"What is it Arannte?" Rea asked, still swimming to shore. Suddenly both Rea and Arannte noticed, she hadn't moved at all. Since the current started, Rea hadn't moved from her spot. Rea felt the current getting stronger.
Suddenly, Rea found herself surrounded by water again. She couldn't tell which way was up or down, or left or right. Everything was the same. She couldn't see the surface, and she couldn't see the bottom. It was as if she'd been pulled into a never ending pool in all directions.
Where is the surface! she thought. Finally! She saw it! She swam to the top, only to discover that she was trapped! She banged her hands against the sudden plastic covering that prevented her from air. The air that her lungs were now burning for. She had only a matter of seconds...a tree vine! Rea swam to the tree vine hanging into the water. She grabbed ahold of it and pulled herself out of the water, and onto the ground.
Breathing heavily, Rea lay on the ground, letting the air dry out her lungs.
Whoo! That took a while. And it's pretty pathetic, but oh well. It'll do.