~*Inspirational Works*~

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StylesEste

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I've been stuck for two years on these two lyric.txt I've been trying to complete, but I get stuck on just really how to even finish them at all.

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I will rise (a broken man) - by me; Robert L. "Styles" Steele
[V1]
I will rise up, and I will follow,
though I faulter, I'll worship you,
I will sing your praise, and I'll share your love,
and I'll show all people, that you're my king of king's

[Chorus1]
I will fall down a broken man
I hear your words
and feel your hands
I will raise up, a new born man

[V2]


[Chorus2]
I will fall down a broken man,
frail and weak, cold as stone,
though I'll look above,
to find my love, my Lord God

As you can see the second verse is completely broke, I am completely unsure how to fill it, and even with what.

Crawl away (into Heaven's wings) again by me

I just want to crawl away
and hide in heaven's wings
let all the troubles just pass me by
and listen, to that word, oh that sweet word of peace.

It's more like a poem, but I can hear a melody why I think about it. I believe it is actually an upbeat song, but I can also here a drawn-out slow melody to it.. again I don't even know how to complete it. >.< it's irritating because I don't like to leave work undone.

Anyways; have ye any Inspirational Works that you have done? Or almost completed? :p
 
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