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Young girl- poem for sum of you girls!

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This is a poem i wrote kinda about sum of my friends, Its not quite finished yet but I thought id post it anyway.
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I don't like the last end but but oh well i might redo that bit. sorry its kinda long


Little Girl

A Young Girl, walks to school on her own,
This life is all that she’s known.
She feels so alone wants to run away,
She’s ready to give her life away.
If only she knew, if only she’d try,
She would know she doesn’t have to die.
She thinks suicide is painless,
And her life is meaningless.
She can’t see the point in her existence,
but she just needs to learn persistence.
She has so much to live for,
She needs to open her wings and soar.
But her truth is jumbled with lies,
As she walks home alone she cries

A Beautiful Girl, crying on her bed alone,
The pain she feels is all that she’s known.
Wants to give up her life, can’t fight much longer,
She’s feels she’s too weak, needs to be made stronger.
But the devils lied to her told her she useless,
Told her she’s ugly, and her futures hopeless.
Her mind’s grown to believe that,
But she needs to hear God’s truth to counteract that.
He tells her she beautiful, but she doesn’t see coz she’s blind
He tells her to keep going, he has a destiny in mind.
He’ll give her the strength, to leave this behind,
But the pain that she feel has distorted her mind.
She’s so blind

A Young Girl, fighting alone,
Wants to give up, she afraid of the unknown.
She tried drugs but found it ain’t the way,
She off them now still trying to believe for a better day.
Still blames herself for things that happened years ago,
It wasn’t her fault and that something she needs to know.
She’s young but she been through a lot,
She hides her pain inside, but its starting to rot.
It will destroy her soon if not dealt with,
Its killing her inside, must get rid of it to live.
She’s got so much to achieve,
She needs to learn to breath.

A Beautiful Girl, dying inside,
Everything she’s been through she tries to hide.
She’s been used and abuse all her life,
She’s channelled the pain to her arms with a knife.
Its doesn’t work doesn’t make things right
She lies awake scared each night.
She’s given up her dreams of making it out of this aright,
She given up everything including her will to fight.
She’s got so much potential so much she could do with her life,
But she’s given in not going to fulfil her life.
She’s ready to chuck everything away,
She doesn’t feel she can keep going another day.
But there is hope for a better day,
Soon will come a better way.

Young girls, don’t give up or chuck everything away,
Just hope for a better tomorrow, and try to make a better today.
Hang on to God, hes all you’ve got,
Its your choice whether you make it or not,
Take his hand let him help you win the fight,
In the end He’ll make everything aright.
You little girl are loved so much,
even when you don’t feel his touch.
In the dark he’s still there,
He sees every single tear,
You're loved so much beautiful girl

Lizzie Brunskill
 
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