why not making a poem...

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the secret of the personal desire
i was wrapped in that aura
i was up to the mountain
through the road... crying

i was thinking you were into the shape of a boy
you were a boy
i shook your hand
i was a genious dreaming

with nobody around, no folks
you and me and i suffered in the night
twisting between my sheets suffering
shaken by a tremendous desire

why me?
i will still going forward with the rememberance
taking a walk through infinite gardens for the eternity
i dont have to face nothing

i am gustav
gustav tries to fight for what he wants
gustav is asking for blessings to forget the bad
why the poverty touches gustav? what right poverty has over gustav if he is supposed to have god as father?

then gustav thinks that you dont exist
gustav only thinks in making money to spend in parties
because you didnt bless him, and you let the poverty touched him
less, but i still suffer
 

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