Who, is most important to you??

[rickyknight1]

What will you say when we finally see each other
What will you say when our eyes meet?
When your glance locks with mines?
When we share the same breath,
When we stand side by side
What will you say
What will your mouth utter
It's been too long since we've spoken
Its been an eternity
Your memory is What keeps me strong
Your person lives inside me
We are faithful friends you and I
I remember when my friends spat in my face
I remember when my family kicked the dust on me
I was abandoned, i was alone
But you gave me a hand, you threw your coat over me
You became a light for my feet
You are the tiny spark that lights up my fire
So tell me, what will you say

 

[Tim Goodwin]

What will you say when we finally see each other
What will you say when our eyes meet?
When your glance locks with mines?
When we share the same breath,
When we stand side by side
What will you say
What will your mouth utter
It's been too long since we've spoken
Its been an eternity
Your memory is What keeps me strong
Your person lives inside me
We are faithful friends you and I
I remember when my friends spat in my face
I remember when my family kicked the dust on me
I was abandoned, i was alone
But you gave me a hand, you threw your coat over me
You became a light for my feet
You are the tiny spark that lights up my fire
So tell me, what will you say

Aside from some spag issues, I like it. Keep up the good work.

 

[rickyknight1]

Aside from some spag issues, I like it. Keep up the good work.

What are spag issues? Lol. And thank you !

 

[Tim Goodwin]

What are spag issues? Lol. And thank you !

Spelling, punctuation and grammar.

 

[rickyknight1]

Spelling, punctuation and grammar.

O ok! Yes, I'm not an actual writer. Im an engineer this is just one of my hobbies. I dont have any actual training. You can consider me as an amatuer hahaha

 

[Tim Goodwin]

Is anybody really a quote unquote writer? We put down things from the heart, mind and soul on paper and it makes us feel good inside and so doing we hope to make others feel good as well. Your writing inspires people to think and feels good to you and others so mission accomplished. Some folks hobbies have turned them into writers without them even trying. Tolkien once said a single dream is worth a thousand realities. So keep on dreaming and writing what you feel. That's what's important. God loves dreamers and wondrous variety in life.

 

[rickyknight1]

Lol thank you. That makes all the difference, i love when people appreciate my work