The Devil -

[srp]

in my closet
under my bed
outside my window
in my head

giving me a choice
to my decline
I hear their voice

with the powers
in my dreams
they go unseen

hope is clear
I pray to Jesus
to always stay near

 

[brinny]

This is good. The rhythm of it is quite captivating and it punches it out creating riveting visuals in the readers head.

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