song recording (input wanted on singing)

[LivingforGod13]

ok I recording this song on my computer so....the quality SUCKS! so basically I sound twice as good in person. lol.
oh btw... the I had a little guitar trouble cause I'm kind of sick so I can't think right..... so in the second verse I kind of messed up...... like badly.... anyway! tell me what you guys think! please!!!
~*Lilly
P.S. I want inptu on my singing not my guitar skills lol........(cause I suck at guitar)

 

[peanutbutter12]

Hard to give criticism without a link...

 

[LivingforGod13]

Hard to give criticism without a link...

ya really sorry bout that I'm getting to it I'm having trouble trying to figure out something give me a second ok?

 

[LivingforGod13]

sorry for the wait I'm REALLY sorry!!!! its almost ready

 

[LivingforGod13]

AW MAN! soooo sorry guys it didn't work I'll try to fix it later but its not working SOO SORRY!

 

[LivingforGod13]

http://www.myspace.com/breakingthesilendtheband

theres my bands site (its not very interesting)

 

[LivingforGod13]

http://www.myspace.com/breakingthesilence_band
thats the other band site...... not very interesting either