SECRETS (inspired by Death note)

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I have a secret
I can create worlds and transcend time
it happened when i was a boy
I was still a small child
back when, my fathers bedroom was always filled with cigarette smoke
"Its time for you to start acting like a man"
thats what he always said
Then one day i remember staring at him feeling confused
he weighed less than ninety pounds
and he kept spilling out his inner arteries
Lung cancer
I remember always waking up to the sound of my mother's type writer
she was the most beautiful woman i had ever seen
she has the perfect mixture of joy and laughter
mixed with a dab of pain and misery
I have a secret
I can create worlds and live in them
 
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Farewell:
Good byes are always hard
because when you know
that- you're leaving a part
of your soul,
you feel like, a piece
of you is missing.
You search for it
but then you remember
you think back to the pain
you remember the agony.
Tears flood from your eyes
as it all starts coming
back to you
The sharp pain in your chest
the headaches and the
aching throats!
You spent all night crying
now you remember
why you hate good byes
especially when it tears you up
So instead of saying good bye
you change your mind
you turn around
and you say,
Hello

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SECRETS- Pt. 2

"What kind of f#@%ing kid writes s#@t like this"
That was my aunt's
husband speaking
I made sport to catch a peek
of her whenever she
would come out of
the shower
One day i decided to
write about it
he found it
I heard a lot of murmurs
between the two of them
over the family table
I caught a glimpse
of her
she looked slightly aroused
it was on that day
that it happened
I saw a purple orb hovering
over me in my bedroom
it blackened everything
I felt like i was
in another dimension
I have a secret
and it happened on that day




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Secrets: world creation #1

I was a hero
I stood 6 feet tall
with bulging muscles
a sharp sword was
held tight by
my firm grip
I glared over the
horizon
with the sunset
right beneath me
my eyes held
a burning amber
My fortitude was
held together
by righteousness
and justice
I wore them like
a breast plate

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Secrets: The villain

I am ruler of
these lands
I took it with
my bare hands
and i held it
by it's neck
I gave it
no relief
when it cried it's
plea for mercy
They call me
king iron fist
my reputation
precedes me
I am the manifestation
of human nature
pride greed hate
My parents abandoned
me as a child
soon after I
fell into slavery
til one day we
grew tired of
our oppressors
we performed
a coup
and captured
our freedom
Now, im just
proof that- human
frailty can
be costly

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Secrets: The hero

I was now a part of the world which i had created. It was beautiful, the lands expanded as far east as they did towards the west. The sun glarred in the middle of the sky; the clouds were so bright and fluffy, one could skip on them. I soon saw the smoke rising up ahead- it was coming from asmall town. One which was filled with slaves and merchants. This smoke was symbolic but, in a different sort of way- it signaled hard manual larbor, and as creator, it's one whith whom i am opposing. This world was very different from what i had intended it to be, all of it was atrocious! Like the dirt beneath my nails, i regarded it all as foul. Soon after,I became bold and i confronted the town's people. I demanded for an explanation; i sought answers with questions that i hated, like- who's responsible, for example. I was in hot pursuit of my culprit and i wanted to slit his throat! Eventually, I came across several answers, of which, i did not like. I had sorted out counsel- i met with a mage, one with which i can gain advice. He familiarized me with the perpetrator- an infamous king, who went by the alias "Iron fist"

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Secrets : King Iron fist

I sat in my chair- a golden throne. I find it very fitting, I deserve everything that i take, which is mines. [one of the kings trusted advisers, Lorell, came walking in. He approached the king with a by word.]
"My king, i have received some disturbing news. The end of our raid is come- as we speak, he is looking for you." He said.
"Lorell, explain yourself. Why do you trouble me with the actions of just one man?" The king replied.
"Aye, one man yes. But, this is not just another mere man. He is the creator. And he is seeking penance on our behalf."
The king grew furious and with a stroke of pride, he said- "Shall one man come and rise against us and my empire, that which i have built!? Or shall one man dare to venture, and rise himself up against a giant fortress?"
"Oh! But, my king, we must become more clever. We must not make the mistake of under estimating our enemy. He must die right away, and i know just the person to do such a - job."


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Secrets: The Dragon

And so, there it was; death in the sky. At the sight of this dragon, my whole body trembled. The men were immobolized. We stared in shear terror, as the mythical beast approached us. It's roar shook the earth, it was spraying out hot lava from its mouth, melting everything in its paths.
"Let's make a run for it!" The mage yelled out. We scrambled around; looking for safety. The dragon kept flying above, encircling us like a shark, when it smells blood.
"We have to use the enchanted staff to kill him." The mage suggested.
"In the light of recent events, we created a number of poweful enchanted items." He said.
"Do what you must." I replied.
He got on his horse, and climbed the hill, to get closer to the dragon. He was planning to strike it, with his enchanted staff. The dragon immediately noticed the mage up on the hill. He started diving in on him, at maximum speed. I knew I had to do something. So I grabbed an archers' bow and arrow. I climbed up on the opposite side of the hill, that was facing the both of them. As they were going on a collision course. I took a shot at the dragons' face, it exploded on impact. I stuck a grenade with a sticky like substance on the edge of my arrow. The detonation caused the dragon a short confusion. But, the mage plunged on the opportunity. He stood up on the horse during mid stride, he then leaped in the air, and pierced the dragon right through its neck. The dragon flew the scene. We watched him drag away as his neck wound spilled basins of blood. He made it a hundred yards or so from us, before he collapsed to his eternal resting place. His vacated existence and inevitable death, opened the tunnel for my life to continue once more.


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Secrets: The final battle

He came along, riding fiercly on his golden chariot. There was a cloud of dustball floating right behind him, the thunder and lighting of the sky seemed to have showed up just for this ocassion.
His horses were black, and his armor was made of gold and metal. I for one had no chance to quiver in my boots. No time for cowardice or fear. He started, "We meet at long last creator. A show of respect and grattitude is owed you."
But I retorted "I'm not here for your appraisal. It is as enemies that we meet."
"Aye, but the calf deserves to know its been eaten by a lion. The sheep- a wolf. Likewise, the snake by the eagle, and you the creator by me."
I drew my sword, I had no recompensations for that man. I recountered "I hope that by nightfall, I get to stick your head on the tip of my blade."
He attacked me with his enormous hammer, so much so that, had I been strucked, I would've surely turned to dust. I had instructed all of my men to stay behind; this little endeavor was between me and the king. We were very evenly matched, and our battle had come to a draw. "I did not figure you a warrior, creator. I am impressed. Indeed it is by unforseen circumstances that we meet. I have shaped this world very unlike you-" I immediately intervened, "I've been disgraced! I am not proud of this, world, as you call it."
"Fret not, I am the execution of your right arm. For behold, before me, this world swung loosely by it's tail."
I kept a dagger at my side, I had already set a trap. It was a boulder hanging above him on the castle grounds. I launched my dagger at the rope setting free, that which I had ensnared. It crushed him. His legs were immobilized, he became invalid. And so i dicapitated him.

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