Opinion on my first Christian song.

[Mrkneeha]

I would really like anybodies honest opinion on my first Christian rap song.

YouTube - David-If Christ Cracked the Sky

 

[djsciple]

Aww man, 2010 and NO ONE commented. Are you still in the game? Let me tell you these are some convicting lyrics to the listener and towards the church and they can be heard clearly, unlike some other artists. Great rap, gospel and preaching sections.

PREACH!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ta6Fo58Z8hg

 

[Mrkneeha]

Thanks for the kind words, I hope it has been used to convict some, I still rap a little bit, mostly for fun, I do a lot more spoken word now...

 

[Kel Il]

This isn't bad at all man. Nice flow and delivery. Lyrics aren't blow me away but they definitely work for what you're doing, solid work man. We should hit a collab sometime.

 

[Mrkneeha]

Thanks Man, I appreciate the kind words.

This song was written a few years ago so I think I have grown as a lyricist since then, I'm still no Christon Gray though. Do you have a youtube channel or a sound cloud so I can check out your stuff?

 

[Kel Il]

https://soundcloud.com/kel-il