I like the look of the watercolor. However, you have a perspective issue going on.
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The figures and cars on the left side are dwarfed by the figure on the right.
Interestingly, on the left side everything works together. And on the right side everything works together.
If you treated each half as a separate work it would be fine. In fact, you could put in one or two more of these slivers of life style paintings and frame it.
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