Is this english to cantonese translation accurate?

[chiwawa]

當我的情人這個情人節？ Will you be my valentine this Valentine's Day?

I used Google translate, but I'm not entirely sure that it is accurate...
if not, could you tell me how to write this phrase properly so a canto person can read it? thanks!

 

[cantonboy]

ho e lor ( can also lor )

 

[josephbonello]

thats pretty close.

 

[kellyPQ]

i think that's close enough.
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