Hi all,
A guy whom i met online has asked me to set these lyrics to music for him.
I'm wondering if anyone can help me figure out what this poem is about.
I need unbiased opinions from people who could be considered as music listeners.
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EDIT:
Can you analyze each verse and chorus and describe what you all think the writer is saying in each?
I've numbered each verse and chorus for you.
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Second EDIT
Let's remember that you nice folks are privileged to see the lyrics. BUT when the guy will sing the song on stage, NOBODY will see the lyrics - they will only hear the words that come from his mouth.
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Third EDIT
Psalm 139:8 has been pointed out and established several times.
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Thank you very much for your time and your analysis.
I Will Never Leave You
Verse 1
I am blinded and bloodied
The temple all around me has come down
She has searched me for my secret, secret secret
And left me chained and broken here
And left me chained and broken here
Chorus 1
She said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
Verse 2
I am sitting in the ashes
Of the house she has burned down
She is sitting there, smiling, holding matches
On the other side of town
On the other side of town
Chorus 2
She said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8 )
I will never leave you
Verse 3
I am sitting in the darkness
Wishing that my mother’s son had died
I was shivering because of cold and fear
When I heard a voice that cried
Then I heard a voice that cried
Chorus 3
It said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8)
I will never leave you
Verse 4
I’ve been consumed and constricted
It’s been four dark and helpless days
My way back to the living has been sealed
And my life is gone away
And my life is gone away
Chorus 4
But He said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8)
I will never leave you
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EDIT:
Can you analyze each verse and chorus and describe what you all think the writer is saying in each?
I've numbered each verse and chorus for you.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Second EDIT
Let's remember that you nice folks are privileged to see the lyrics. BUT when the guy will sing the song on stage, NOBODY will see the lyrics - they will only hear the words that come from his mouth.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Third EDIT
Psalm 139:8 has been pointed out and established several times.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A guy whom i met online has asked me to set these lyrics to music for him.
I'm wondering if anyone can help me figure out what this poem is about.
I need unbiased opinions from people who could be considered as music listeners.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
EDIT:
Can you analyze each verse and chorus and describe what you all think the writer is saying in each?
I've numbered each verse and chorus for you.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Second EDIT
Let's remember that you nice folks are privileged to see the lyrics. BUT when the guy will sing the song on stage, NOBODY will see the lyrics - they will only hear the words that come from his mouth.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Third EDIT
Psalm 139:8 has been pointed out and established several times.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Thank you very much for your time and your analysis.
I Will Never Leave You
Verse 1
I am blinded and bloodied
The temple all around me has come down
She has searched me for my secret, secret secret
And left me chained and broken here
And left me chained and broken here
Chorus 1
She said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
Verse 2
I am sitting in the ashes
Of the house she has burned down
She is sitting there, smiling, holding matches
On the other side of town
On the other side of town
Chorus 2
She said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8 )
I will never leave you
Verse 3
I am sitting in the darkness
Wishing that my mother’s son had died
I was shivering because of cold and fear
When I heard a voice that cried
Then I heard a voice that cried
Chorus 3
It said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8)
I will never leave you
Verse 4
I’ve been consumed and constricted
It’s been four dark and helpless days
My way back to the living has been sealed
And my life is gone away
And my life is gone away
Chorus 4
But He said: I will never leave you
I am here to help you
I will never forsake you
I am here to help you
If you make your bed in hell I’ll be there too (Psalm 139:8)
I will never leave you
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EDIT:
Can you analyze each verse and chorus and describe what you all think the writer is saying in each?
I've numbered each verse and chorus for you.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Second EDIT
Let's remember that you nice folks are privileged to see the lyrics. BUT when the guy will sing the song on stage, NOBODY will see the lyrics - they will only hear the words that come from his mouth.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Third EDIT
Psalm 139:8 has been pointed out and established several times.
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