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Fifty traditional poetry forms - part 2

20 - Minute Poetry

The Minute Poem is a rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

Tick Tock

No tick of time can be returned.
A lesson learned,
Each one should be,
To teach to see.

No tock of time will be reversed,
None are rehearsed.
We ride the flow,
Too fast, too slow.

Each grain of sand that passes through,
It says, Be true.
I fall and set.
But you, not yet.

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21 - Monody Poetry

A form originating from the solo ode sung in a greek tragedy. Any poem of lament for someones death.
With such a vague definition I struggled to get traction until I realised the Jeremiah's Lamentations are a Monody.

Lament for Adam's Dead Children

In darkness walks all mankind, Adam's children, no better than beasts.
Nations and thier cities, all their glory, no better than blindness.
Death inhabits our warp and weft, ruling without a word.
It reaps, it reaps, relentlessly the passing human herd.
Silken lies and petty thievery stain us through and through.
Grime ingrains us but we wash our hands of it.
Rich rulers, wanting more, make poorer their captive poor.
Abhorrent men make war, owning no law except that of cruelty.
Crying, crying, laughing, the human race builds its towers on the sands of Babylon.
Earth breaks and quakes with their wieght. It groans with the pain of waiting.

Evil always moving through dark shadows, the shadows made by men.
Night-darkness loving, it throws out and wide its net of lies.
Those who seek truth, even they are ensared and struggle to survive
Hear our cries O Father of light! Deliver us from evil!
Reasoning with darkened minds, men wrestle like rats in sacks of bones.
Arrogant beyond measure, we measure and measure, yet always in error.
Long the night of Adam's sorrows, though there in is feast and jest.
Long the weary pilgrim journey ever in the shadow of death.
Efface the darkness O Good God, declare the death of death.
Deliver us from evil, O Giver of our every breath.

Sinner that I am, I bow down before your Holy Face.
In grace I would bathe and be cleansed of my every stain.
No sacrifice of mine can atone for my crimes against a holy God.
Nothing I bring but a begger with sin bowed down.
Eternal One forgive, God of grace give life to this dead one.
Release this prisoner of death while still he has breath.

Beautiful the feet that walked the waves to crush the serpent head.
Exulted the Name of He who nailed the curse to slayed the snake.
See Him lifted up, the wounded saviour, a man of sorrows.
Answer his call of love, "Come to me all you wounded ones."
Victory was gained by his bloody death. Now death itself will be slain.
Enter into life through this door of his bloody sacrifice.
Death has no more hold upon the soul that puts its trust in Him.

Believe, be freed, whosoever you are, however near, however far.
You children of Adam, turn to The Light of this world from above.
Christ was willing to die unjustly that you might be right with God.
He willingly gave up his pure life that you might have life everlasting.
Raised from the dead, with trumpet call He will raise up all who are his.
In rejoicing will sad earth renew and welcome the conquering hero.
Sons and daughters of Adam turn, turn, from the shadow of death.
Turn from beastdom, to be reborn by the Spirit of God.

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22 - Monorhyme Awit Poem

Monorhyme is a type of poem in which every single line has the same rhyming sound at the end of the verse. A monorhyme can occur in a verse, a simple passage, or even an entire poem as long as each line has that repetitive sound. The use of the monorhyme within poetry is often seen in works and pieces published by Welsh, Arabic, and Latin cultures.

There are many different monorhyme forms. I've chosen to do this one in the Awit form.
Awit is a Filipino poetry form. It means song. It is unique in that a verse should be one complete, grammatically correct, sentence, written in any number of quatrains. (4 line multiples), a narrative, it tells a story, 12 syllables per line, each verse mono-rhymed aaaa bbbb cccc etc.

Good Seeds

He scatters the good seeds with his work hardend hands,
Across the furrowed earth he casts them in wide bands,
Minding that some fall wrong yet reckoned in his plans,
For though these drop on stones, most in the good soil lands.

With the sun's warmth and light the good seeds comes alive,
Pushing, greening, upward, the farmer sees them strive,
Through drought and in fierce storm, he prays that they survive,
Watching clouds, counting days, till harvest time arrives.

When comes the day to cut, then do the sickles swing,
As labourers gather sheaves, the harvest to bring in
With toil and dust and sweat, but in their hearts they sing,
For from the curst earth comes gold grain fit for a king.

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Fish you gave me a great compliment when you said........ best poetry you have written in a long time. I 've got news for you. These poems are just about the best I can do.

Because of your poetry. You are great !
 
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23 - Naani poem
Naani poems are from India, introduced by Dr. N. Gopi of the Telugu people. Naani translates as "expression of one and all". Composed of one verse, which is four lines in total. Each line is generally 3 - 5 syllables (no more than ten) equaling a total of 20 - 25 syllables in its entirety.
There is no rhyme pattern scheme for the naani The first line usually states the subject matter, while the remaining three lines express the foundation of the subject, or go into detail about it.

The Bible

This book is heavy
With Urim and Thummim.
Opened with eyes and ears
Its lightness gives strength.

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24 - Nonet poem

A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line seven syllables, etc... until line nine finishes with one syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.

Words

Words were in the heart of The Temple,
Written on two stones long ago.
Gold angels watched over them.
Those stones now, who knows where?
Those words now written
On hearts with care,
Heard by ears
That want
To.

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I didn't know that a poem did not have to rhyme to be a poem. I thought that not rhyming was always prosecutors. I guess you learn something every day. Wonderful poems you have written.
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Hello Gc - I'm surprised that you didn't know that. Rhyming is only one of the many components of poetry.
There is also rhythm, usually measured by metre or syllable count but really it's just the 'music/beat' of the words, how they sound when read out loud. Do you listen to much poetry? Many of the poetry sites have audio examples.
Then there is punctuation. How that is used or not used shapes a poem greatly.
Then of course line breaks and verse structure.
Then of course words, words, glorious words and the wonderful things the english language allows you to do with them.
Some people may then say, well if it doesn't rhyme what is the difference between poetry and prose?
A very good question but not to be answered tonight. There is poetical prose and there is prosaic poetry but never the less poetry is poetry and prose is prose.
Thank you for your encouragement.
Go well, go wisely
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afish, you have been productive and I'm sorry I've been too distracted of late. Your Minute Poem is awesome! It took me out of time and made me think. "Number your days.."

I obviously am going to have to start upping my game!
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25 - Ode
The ode is of Greek origin, an elaborately structured poem praising or glorifying an event or individual, describing nature intellectually as well as emotionally. A classic ode is structured in three major parts: the strophe, the antistrophe, and the ephode. The English ode's most common rhyming scheme is ABABCDECDE.
Greek odes were originally poetic pieces performed with musical accompaniment. As time passed on, they gradually became known as personal lyrical compositions whether sung or merely recited.
The ode conveys exalted and inspired emotions. It is a lyric in an elaborate form, expressed in a language that is imaginative, dignified and sincere. An English ode is lyrical verse in praise of, or dedicated to someone or something that captures the poet's interest or serves as an inspiration for the ode.

An Ode to The Puppeteers


Your dancing dolls are groomed for show, well known.
The show's so good when that fat lady sings,
Crooning blues to a mellow toned trombone.
But I want to know who's pulling your strings.
The Quiz-Master with twinkling eyes, smiles sweet.
He tells us, we could win the million prize.
The honey coloured blond is baking cakes.
That treacle tart looks good enough to eat.
Now folks it's time to watch some exercise.
Our team is hot and starts to overtake.
The fans around the ground they cheer and sing
But I want to know who's pulling the strings.

Your puppets play on every earthly stage,
Gathering gold to buy our very souls,
Sowing lies and hatred, cruel wars to wage,
So we'd like to know who's waggling those poles.
Your story's plot is evil through and through,
With poor men, small men sweating blood and tears,
To oil the cogs within the wheels of state,
To grease the palms of judges turned askew.
Do off-script dummies spoil the atmosphere?
No sweat, get someone to assassinate.
We've watch this show so long and feel real sick.
But we need to know who's jiggling those sticks.

Scheming schemes behind the scenes to mislead,
While masters, minions, machinators act.
You are deceived to believe you succeed.
All crime is seen, that is a divine fact.
On judgment day, for you no hiding place.
Bitter grapes of wrath all your crew will taste.
Your palaces and prisons all laid waste.
No more strings to pull or poles to jiggle.
Though awhile you were an evil riddle,
Your very memory will be erased.

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Links to Parts 1 and 2 -
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Fifty traditional poetry forms - part 2

20 - Minute Poetry

The Minute Poem is a rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

Tick Tock

No tick of time can be returned.
A lesson learned,
Each one should be,
To teach to see.

No tock of time will be reversed,
None are rehearsed.
We ride the flow,
Too fast, too slow.

Each grain of sand that passes through,
It says, Be true.
I fall and set.
But you, not yet.

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I guess I should of looked before asking if you wrote :confused2: I like your style. When it goes into the different techniques of poetry I shy away. Especially when it goes back a century or two and it becomes more of a puzzle to incorporate the words correctly.
 
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Hi ES - no problem, CF is a very large tank filled with many strange fish. :)
I've found this 50 forms challenge I've set myself has enabled me to push out my poetical boundaries to new and interesting horizons. I've certainly written many more poems now than I otherwise would have done.
I like your phrase,
.... it becomes more of a puzzle to incorporate the words correctly.
Isn't that a definition of the 'craft' of poetry?
I would certainly recommend regularly reading (and reciting) some of 'the old poets' (George Herbert, Samuel Coleridge, Dylan Thomas) to imbibe and maybe 'catch' some of their craftiness and sublimity.
Go well,
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Hi ES - no problem, CF is a very large tank filled with many strange fish. :)
I've found this 50 forms challenge I've set myself has enabled me to push out my poetical boundaries to new and interesting horizons. I've certainly written many more poems now than I otherwise would have done.
I like your phrase,

Isn't that a definition of the 'craft' of poetry?
I would certainly recommend regularly reading (and reciting) some of 'the old poets' (George Herbert, Samuel Coleridge, Dylan Thomas) to imbibe and maybe 'catch' some of their craftiness and sublimity.
Go well,
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That is the craft for sure but reading the greats makes me feel worse about my own writings :grinning: that's why mine are pretty basic. I need to search my organized clutter because I tried to test the different ways of writing before. Anyways, love your way you write and hoping for more.
 
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Ode to afish

Your poems pile up in every form and function,
Some quite stylized, others much at ease,
Some express a deep, exuding unction,
Others seem quite zany if you please.
The ballad and the sonnet quickly conquered,
And triolet dispatched without a thought,
You moved to villanelles and even further
To forms whose rules would tend to make one bonkers,
But undeterred you plowed, you bravely fought,
Unearthing jewels, so bless your writing ferver.

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Ode to afish

Oh Roadrunner, Yo!
Your ode made me feel so
Fine and flushed.
It made me blush
To read such tush.
I thank thee much.
If I had the time
I'd write a rhyme
To match your lines
So sublime
But I fear I'd be too anodyne.
I need to be a bit more bonkers
So that the mind blurs
And the soul stir,
And occurs that phrase
That begins that phase,
The creative haze
Of poet-daze.

And to you fellow word-wright an irish blessing for Road Runners all -
Irish Blessing.jpg

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26 - Ottava rima
A form of italian origin. Originally used for long poems on heroic themes. The ottava rima verse in English consists of eight lines, usually iambic pentameters. Each verse consists of three alternate rhymes and one double rhyme, following the a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c pattern.

To be a pilgrim

Neither to Byzantium nor to Rome
Does this tattered soul desire to travel.
At journey's end the place to be is home
Waiting for life's riddle to unravel.
No sacred art nor holy-fire tomb
Will sate this soul's need to be unsinful.
So many roads already have been trod
But not by feet get we to Holy God.

At Oxford's rivers fresh faced youth does drink,
Knowledge quenching their heart's desire to know
The mystery of that missing, holy link
That joins above to what is here below.
Some think that in the shadow of the Sphinx
That ancient riddle may be known, not so.
A monument of long dead arrogance
Of an insolent glory that was, once.

This pilgrim, waiting to be transported,
So many man-made shrines and temples saw.
Many heads bowed low, but he still thirsted
To be cleansed from all his stains and flaws.
Then he heard, that for him Good God had bled
And died, to make good, God's own holy law.
No more journeys seeking for salvation
This pilgrim's at home in God's own nation.

There is a golden city yet to see,
Worth all the traveling and the weariness.
Its welcoming gates, lustrous and comely.
Its jeweled foundations all souls impress.
But the best therein is that most holy,
Rainbow aureoled throne of awesomeness,
Where reigns Good God, that man, the once slain lamb,
Upon new earth, in sweet Jerusalem.

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afish,
Your Ottava rima is really top shelf, you must have tapped into a double dose of inspiration.
"Rainbow aureoled throne of awesomeness" - a sight to behold! Your message is clear and beautifully expressed.

Oh, by the way, thanks for the response to the afish ode. This gave me a great laugh and I know exactly what you mean by the last few lines:
"And occurs that phrase
That begins that phase,
The creative haze
Of poet-daze."

Blessings!
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27- Palindrome

Palindrome is derived from two Greek words, palin, which means “again,” and dromos, which means “way,” or “direction.” It is defined something that can be read forward as well as backward, or in reverse order with the same effects and meanings.
In this palindrome the words of each line of the first half are written in reverse order to give the second half.

Give Wisely

Give
Word of God.
Let light be! He said.
So do not be wayward like sheep,
Sheep lost, bleating, afraid; for wolves are hunting.
Now dove-like and serpent-like think,
Wisely.
Wisely
Think like serpent and like dove now.
Hunting are wolves for afraid, bleating, lost sheep.
Sheep-like, wayward, be not. Do so,
Said He, Be light! Let
God of word
Give.

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28 – Pantoum

The English pantoum adapts a long-standing form of oral Malayan poetry (pantun) that first entered written literature in the fifteenth century. The most basic form of the pantun is a quatrain with an abab rhyme scheme. Each line contains between eight and twelve syllables.
The modern pantoum is a poem of any length, composed of four-line verses in which the second and fourth lines of each verse serve as the first and third lines of the next verse. In the last verse the last line of a pantoum is often the same as the first and repeats the third line of the first verse as its second line.


Lift up your heads!

Lift up your heads! Heed the sky's announcing!
Regard the shaking earth, the roaring seas.
As when righteous Noah proclaimed the ending,
So men ignore and do just as they please.

Regard the shaking earth, the roaring seas.
Overwhelming are our tribulations,
So men ignore and do just as they please.
Keep your souls from darkness with all patience.

Overwhelming are our tribulations.
From dark clouds, lightnings light from east to west.
Keep your soul from darkness with all patience
Ready to stand before The King, thrice blest.

From dark clouds, lightnings light from east to west,
As when righteous Noah proclaimed the ending.
Ready to stand before The King, thrice blest,
Lift up your heads, heed the sky's announcing.

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