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Da' Bard and His Deadliness
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I'm gonna start it off for all ya's:

So many faces
Lost in one worldly crowd
So many places
Where I'd be lost to the sound

I'm just a grain of sand
Lost in the desert of life
I'm just a speck on the glass
As the hours tick by

[But I see a sun shine
A spring of life, a spring of love
To see that sun shine
To drink from that spring of life!]

So many stories
All waiting to be heard
So many worries
Sorrows of our sad world

I'm just a knot in the tree
The tall tree of life
I'm just a small fish
In an ocean of strife

Chorus

So many people
Straying away from the light
They stand on their steeples!
Only to preach for a fight!

Chorus

Where is the sun shine?
Where is the water I need?
Where is the sun light?
Where is the Lord that I need?

Chorus (without 'but') x4

I'm just a grain of sand
Lost in the desert of life
I'm just a speck on the glass
As the hours tick by
 
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Sorrow rings through the streets
Only one man standing there
At his feet, one-million miles
Of peoples loves and cares
Oh!

[I need purgance from myself
From all that tainted in me
Every day of my life
Every day of my life
Comes back to haunt me!]

Sour feelings flood his mind
He stands his ground, no retreat
Every pain from all the cares of people
He will not retreat, never
He will not retreat!

Bridge

[[Wring my mind of awfull things
Fill it back with love and mercy
Cleanse my soul of blackened heart beats
Fill it with, sweet melody!
Sweet melody!]]

Finally, sorrow is gone
The man stands alone
The loves are pure, the cares and perfect
The man sings in tone
Oh!
Now he's not alone!
All nations sing the tone!

Bridge/Chorus/Bridge/Chorus/Chorus

Walkin' back home bare-feet
At the door, his loving father
Arms wide, he ushers in
Every loving follower!
Every loving follower!

What'ch ya think? I'm open to positive and negative critisizm (and I know, I'll need to do a spell check on it later)
 
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Lifes just a burden
Lifes like a box of chocolates
Lifes like dead birds, singing
It's almost impossible
I am unstoppable
I get the burdens of the chocolates
It ain't sweet

[Grave stones are joyous
Grave stones will bring the gloom to us
Room for a begger
But no room for our Saviour
Give me His reality!
Or give me death for blasphemy!
Cause this world's just gotten, way too worldly!]

We've discused this before, now, again
We live like pigs, we roll around in our own sin
The beat is ours to flow
It's taken years for us to know
My rhymes and my rythems are tryin' ta' blend!

Chorus

And God only knows
Where each of us goes after service
We preach, then we slow down
We all get a little over our heads
And we all need to make amends! Amen!

Chorus x3
 
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I am unsatisfied, by the words I've sounded
I am resentful, to the words I have made
I am unfullfilled, with the world I've made around me
I no longer long for, the things that I see

[You are my foothold in darkness
My light in these broken places
A place of refuge, a defense against the sin
A strong tower, a place of loving rage
But a place where I'm safe, forever in
Oh, but a place where I'm safe, forever in]

The numbers add up to things I don't need
The theory places me where I can not stand
The battle rages, but I'm outnumbered
This wars' a place I've never been, never been

Chorus x2

So mighty, is thy glory
But I'm without you, it seems, as my eyes can see
But so holy, is they magesty
You are here with me in the place I've never been
Oh, Lord, you are here with me in the place I've never been

Chorus x4


People, I don't want to be the only one that writes songs here. PLEASE?
 
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Left alone, in the shade
of something totaly magnificent
It costs so much, just to be
Part of everything I'm missing
It'll pay off, ten fold in end
But I'm still wondering if it's worth it

[Yet here I am to live again
I've got so much now to change
And here I am to fight again
The Word is my only weapon
Here I am, to stand again
The World is my victem
Here I am, just now to listen
Cause you're everything to me]

Her eyes before blazed like flames
Her face looked so perfect
But behind that face was the death
Of all the joy I once held
I tought her love and thought her pleased
But she stuffed those words back down my throut

My heart broke, I couldn't think
I was lost with no clear who I was and who I am
No words uttered could calm my heart
I had no idea it could happen to me

Chorus

With final breath I'll speak your Word
With final thought I'll bear your name
So much more, is to come
So much that when I first thought I would love

Chorus x4
 
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Hay, thanks! I've been writing a little less than a year now, so I hope I'm getting better. Thank you a lot!
Sorry. I was writing that song while you posted both, so I missed them.
Hay, don't say that. I bet it's great. Come on! If you remember it, go ahead and post it!
 
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