Seems good to me.
Regarding genetics, you asked a very specific question regarding the fusion of chromosomes. I think there are some basic issues to address here:
1. You seem under the impression that chromosome fusions must be beneficial. However, this is not necessarily true. Two things must happen for chromosome fusion to become part of the gene pool of a species. First, the chromosomes must fuse (duh). Second, they must spread through the gene pool. However, such fusions are not necessarily either detrimental or beneficial, they may just be neutral. To spread in the gene pool, they do not have to be beneficial either. Any mutation that is not so detrimental as to inhibit its carriers to reproduce, can be spread in the gene pool. This can include neutral mutations or mutations that are slightly detrimental.
2. With that out of the way, we know of genetic fusions happening in wild and domestic populations of species. For example, the somali wild ass can have 50 or 51 chromosomes (IIRC, might be a different chromosome count though).
3. Equines (horse-like organisms like horses, asses and zebras) are very interesting in that respect, as this genus has a wide variety of chromosome counts and connected effects. The fusions in the wild ass have no effects (at least that we know of). Furthermore, domestic horses have 64 chromosomes while przwalski horses have 66. The interesting thing is that their offspring is fertile, other then for example the domesticated ass, which has 62 chromosomes but only rarely produces fertile offspring with domesticated horses (although this does happen).
4. Thus, from the above we can derive that chromosome fusions are not necessarily impossible. This leads to testable predictions, one of which is in human/chimps. Humans have 46 chromosomes, chimps 48. If humans have a common ancestor with chimps, such a fusion must have taken place (a fusion is the most likely explanation because all other great apes have 48 chromosomes, humans are the only ape with 46). To test this, we can look whether we can find the endings of chromosomes (called telomeres) and the centers of them (called centromeres) in the human chromosome. And we do. The human chromosome 2 has two centromeres (ie, two 'centers'), and in the middle of the chromosome 2 we find two opposing telomeres. We have, as it were, discovered the duct tape used for the fusion in the center of chromosome 2. We can even align this chromosome with the two ape chromosomes it comes from, in which case we get a perfect match.
So, fusions do not need to be beneficial to spread in a population, they can be neutral. They have been observed in nature and the remnants of a relatively recent fusion site can be found in the human chromosomes, indicating that one of these happened after the human lineage split off from the chimp lineage.