And There Was Light

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At first a void, no joy, no sun,
No laugh, no seed, no webs are spun,
No heart leaps up within the chest,
No noble work, no need for rest.

No sin, chagrin or river's bend,
No day or night or winter's blight,
No soothing sounds or gentle coos,
No mowing, lowing, snoring, snooze.

No flesh to yearn, to mourn, to weep,
No chicks, no eggs, no pans, no peeps,
No dawn, no tides, no sand on feet,
No splish, no splash, no wind, no sleet.

No nothing, really, nothing there,
Universe of cupboards bare,
No time is needed, nothing stirs,
Nothing creaks, nothing whirs.

Nothing twinkles, nothing glares,
But then It happened, burps and hares,
Galaxies, frogs and ticks,
Children playing pick-up sticks

Appeared in Time, took up Space,
Humans started human race
To walk world back to very start
In search of Force that forged their heart.

Millennia have come and gone
And yet is played a winsome Song
Of Joy that languished in the Night,
Bursting in a deep delight

That overflowed in sundry forms,
Firmament, seas and storms,
Life arising, teeming, born
To bear the news: Love adorns

Lily pads and ponds and brooks,
Open spaces, smallest nooks,
Deepest pain, highest mount,
Broken reeds, fullest fount.

A seed, it seems, was always there,
Alpha and Omega's lair,
Prince of Peace ordained to shine,
Invade our void as poured out wine

Creating dirt and seeds and rain,
Igniting schemes that self-sustain,
Embedding Joy amongst the folk
As wave of Life envelops, stokes.

Wave on wave, unending tide
Invigors life, then life subsides,
Inviting all to further shore
From whence He came, forevermore,

Where Peace awaits, where grateful souls
Can know the Source that made them whole,
Just past the cross and over hill
God's purest Joy awaits us, still.

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God's Purest Joy Awaits Us

God's purest Joy awaits us still,
If only I had eyes to see...
Past golden feral fountain's rills
God's purest Joy awaits us, still.
I'll tote this load, trudge Terra's hills,
Believing after scarcity
God's purest Joy awaits us. Still,
If only I had eyes to see.

(this poem is written in a poetic form called
a triolet which requires a certain rhyming scheme
and repetition of lines)
 
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Thanks RR, Beautiful! How great is the sure hope we have and how great is our longing for its fulfillment.

I was not familiar with the triolet form. Love the way it brings out punctuation as a significant component of a poem. Have been much enriched by the research you provoked.
The index on one poetry site lists 50 different recognised poetry forms, starting with acrostics and finishing with villanelles. So now I'm wondering if I'm up to doing at least one for all fifty?? Strangely, although writing to a given form requires discipline, it at the same time there is a certain kind of creative freedom there with.

Found this-
We Poets
LuAnn Kennedy (1984– )
We poets are so very strange! We write and write and lose our minds!
Emotions flow in quite a range;
We poets are so very strange!
We’re happy. Then, we quickly change;
To make a world it takes all kinds.
We poets are so very strange!
We write and write and lose our minds!

Keep toting, keep trudging, keep writing,

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"Your eyes will see the King in His beauty; They will behold a far-distant land."
Isaiah 33
 
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Yes Roadrunner you are the one I like your poetry. You are so beautiful and brave enough to write a good poem like you did.

Beauty does exist in you and me both. What are you doing today ? How about this website isn't it good ? I'm going to go to the library later this week. I like your profile too. Cold water is on my mind and I would like to see us pick up someone else to write more than the whole crew we have here. What is your pleasure to write now ?
 
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P.S. please write some on my threads and I will promise to write you more later. I tried real hard to write good poetry and I think I succeeded so, beautiful poetry is hard to come by. What is your favorite poem of all you have written. I want to read it. What do you know about yourself and the whole crew of poets we have here on CF. Anyway I'm fine thanks, please write some on my threads. Thanks Marshall Lancaster . GOD bless.
 
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afish, I have a feeling that you are going to get hooked on the forms and we'll be seeing a lot of these on your thread. I totally agree with you and noticed myself that working within the restrictions of a form has a way of fueling creativity.
LuAnn Kennedy was right - "We poets are so very strange!"
RR
 
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By the way, that last poem was an acrostic. I think I will try a villanelle, though. In the meantime, here is a limerick that is simply for fun since I don't have another poem to post right now.

There Once Was a Poet - Limerick

there once was a poet who blew it
the sky was the limit, he knew it
but fondness for drinkinig
efected his thiking
fromm thents awl his pomes terned 2 suet
 
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Thanks afish! This next poem is using the form called "off the top of my head".

Devotions

Joy
Eruptive
Jubilant
Spewing

Jets
Released
Existentially brewing

Ground of Being
Open
Unsealing
Deep connection,
Spiritual healing

Morning devotion...with coffee
 
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Mustard Seed - A Villanelle

in vivo may the Mustard Seed prevail,
dancing, darting sliver chased by wind,
Providential Mote to fend the gale.

stymied, stuck, indentured to the pale,
a sickened soul may blurt, "Before the end,
in vivo may the Mustard Seed prevail!"

"De novo may bright miracle impale
dank sepulchered life. Creator! send
Providential Mote to fend the gale!"

glued to Terra's unrelenting rail,
passing scenes portending Reaper's yen,
in vivo may the Mustard Seed prevail?

silence soft engulfs Quixotic hail,
cotyledon pierces, then ascends, as
Providential Mote. To fend the gale,

copse encases all in verdant mail.
Unruly, carcassed gust to whisper bend!
In vivo may Thee, Mustard Seed, prevail!
Providential Mote, too, fend the gale!
 
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Mmm RR, complex, rich. I had to work to unwrap it. Yet the unwrapping was as rewarding as the found content. Great image of a verdant, protecting tree cover coming from an 'insignificant' seed. Also the paralleling of 'seed' and 'mote' gave food for thought.
Go well along terra's unrelenting rail.
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Earth Is Not Silent

Cataracts of water
Bubbling of geysers
Gurgling of babies
Flapping as risers
Chirp before dawn
Rustling of chicks
Splashing of frogs
Snapping of twigs.

Wind in the willows
Gathering storms
Pounding of sleet
Myriad forms
Tiptoeing night
Cold lunar rays
Raging hot sun
God on display.

In breaking of darkness
Gushing of light
Dispelling of doubting
Dawn of delight
On cusp of revealing
Veritas poised
Earth is not silent
Be part of the noise.
 
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