A song I wrote called "Alone"

Writing this as I listen:

Good intro; electric guitar, I presume?

Ooh, the vocals are too soft. Sounds like good singing, but the balance is off, and I can't hear much above the guitar.

Perhaps you could make a lyric video? Those are nice, especially for Christian music.

Nice drums! That was well timed; it surprised me, in the good way!

Balance between guitar & drums sounds good.

Nice way to do a touch of guitar towards the end, where the drums drop out for a bit; that works very well.

Overall impression: This is a pretty simple song, but it works well that way. Adjust the balance, and it'll be great!

ByTheSpirit said:

I wrote and performed this song and would love some feedback on it. Wrote it about my Christian Walk.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BQHfsTvERVvox5XfuXiKDLaOFAcpz6my/view?usp=drivesdk

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I really like it. I think it sounds really good.

I agree with the other poster, the mix is slightly too heavy on the guitar in the first portion of the song. Might be too much reverb on the mic too. That is insignificant though to the actual song writing. Your chord progressions and lyrics are well done. I do hope that you know how to copyright your material. It actually is very easy and only costs maybe 20 bucks to do as many songs at once, as you like.

ByTheSpirit said:

Updated and final version, thank you!

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I really, really like that. It was good to see the lyrics too. Good lyrics. A slight tear in my eye. A good tear though! Really good.

I love this! Awesome style, very 90's feel to it.