My Make a Story 2

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Kudo's eyes raged with fury to Renton, he was glad he killed him, he deserved it, "Mom, mother, he deserved to die for what he did to you and me, a piece of sh*t like him wasnt needed on this earth." He told her, anger rising in his voice. "But why didnt you put up any fight?!" He began to yell, he looked down at his hands, all the blood that had been stained on his fingers had because she had played along to his evil plan. He thought it was a game... Snickering, "He said he was my father," He started to laugh, an evil, maniachal laugh, "I didnt believe him, but he went on, playing around in my past..." He laughed harder, scaring even him, he saw Amiko backing away from him. Eyes open wide, smiling ear to ear, motionless, Kudo snapped, he jerked the knife from its sheath and cut his wrist, blood squirted from the wound, Amiko ran towards him, he backed off away from her, he couldnt stand it all, confused, and scared, he grabbed his hair and jerked his head up, slit his own throat.
Kudo felt the life drain away from him as he fell to the ground, unconcious.
 
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((It's about time you posted!))

Kyuui looked in horror through the crack in the door. If only I knew some medical treatments! Then I could be of some help. "Is he demented? He cut himself!" Kyuui said under her breath.
 
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Amiko's eyes bulged and his mother let out a scream before fainting. Amiko, having dealt with a similar situation before on the way to the dojo, rushed to her bag and rummaged for the first aide kit. Sure that he was still alive, she applied some disinfectant and antibotics on his wrist and throat before bandaging them up as best she could. She laid him flat, as to keep too much blood from being lost, and glanced at his fainted mother. There wasn't much that she could do for her, except wait until both of them woke up. She glanced once more at Kudo, too drained to show emotion. She moved to a corner of the room and faced the wall, in thought. He said he'd never try to hurt himself again! He cut his wrist and tried to KILL himself! Such a selfish man. Did he think I would be uneffected? Didn't he try to see his mother's point of view? If he survives, I SWEAR I will forbid him from carrying a weapon until I know he's resolved his issues. Doesn't he know that when he tries to hurt himself, it hurts me even more? She wanted so badly to cry, but she couldn't. Instead, she could only get angry.
 
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The angst within Amiko was building. It was unfortunate that Kyuui would address her at such a time. She whipped around, fire in her eyes, and snapped at the other woman with a shrill voice no one had ever heard from her before, "I DON'T KNOW!!! JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!" She had somehow refrained from any name-calling, since the poor thing had nothing to do with what she was brooding over. She turned back towards the corner, trying to return to her mental rants. A moment later, an elderly figure faded into the room. The old witch scanned the room, seeing a stunned Kyuui, Kudo's unconscious mother, a dying Kudo, and an angsty Amiko. She tapped Amiko's shoulder. "I said LEAVE ME ALO-...Rokia?" she shrieked, but halted in surprise at the sight of her old ally.
The woman didn't waste any time getting to the point. "I saw a vision of tragedy and followed the energy flow here. It seems as if Sonny-boy here reunited with his mother and after a tense conversation, slit his own throat...Am I right?"
Amiko nodded, a lump formed in her throat from the woman's accuracy. Rokia continued, addressing Kyuui this time. "Girl, I need you to go to the other room and inform the others that there is no need to worry, but keep them out of here. Also, please use the mat to drag this lady out, until she reaches conciousness. It needs to be just the three of us for now." With that said, Rokia turned to Kudo and took out a bag. She sprinkled a mixture of dust, pedals and leave over his head and torso. She folded her hands and recited a prayer chant. To Kudo's point of view, it felt as if he had been lassoed and was being pulled back into the world of the living. With the cuts healed up, Kudo's heart restarted beating and he was breathing again. Rokia stood. "My work here is done. It's up to you now, Dear," she said, clapping her hands and vanishing. Amiko's face was blank in disbelief. She returned her gaze towards Kudo and watched him to reawaken.
 
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left only to wonder who this strange old woman. And, having no explanation appear, was left with no choice but to administer to Kudo's mom, doing what she'd been told. She placed Kudo's mom on the rug, and dragged her out of the room. Looking at the startled expression Shinta had, she said "Everything's fine. Amiko just wanted some time alone with Kudo, and this woman just fainted at the sight of Kudo's blood." But in the back of her mind, Kyuui continued to worry for Amiko and her sanity.
 
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After a period of several hours, Amiko was growing impatient. "Really, if you don't wake up soon, I'm going to have to bury you," she told him bitterly. She was almost kidding. Exhausted from watching him, she took out a ball of white yarn and an unfinished project and sat in the corner to knit. As the yarn unwound, so did her nerves.
 
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Slowly, after about five minutes, Kudo opened his eyes, everything was blurry, he groaned, he seemed to have hurt himself because he ached in his neck, but he didnt have the slightest idea what happened.
 
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Hearing him groan, Amiko looked up from her knitting. "So, you're alive after all, huh?" she commented before resuming her knitting. "Rokia popped in and saved you. You slashed your wrists and slit your throat. Kudo...the next time you want to commit suicide...would you please put a little THOUGHT into it first?" Sure she was relieved that he was alright, but at the moment, she was too angry and upset to show any such emotion. "Such a selfish man..." she muttered. It would not be easy to gain her forgivness, but it wasn't impossible. If only he showed some sort of remorse....
 
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((Will you be needing Kyuui any time soon?))

Right about then, Kudo's mother woke up from her passed out state. "Oh, good. You're awake." Shinta said.
Kyuui took a peek in the other room "It appears your son just woke up as well. Apparently he's one tough cookie." Kyuui said.
 
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Oh hi guys. I guess I'll join in this story!

A mysterious figure dressed in a black trenchcoat and boots walks by. His blue hair seems to reflect the moon's light like a mirror.
 
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((Guys, This is at an out-of-the-way dojo. Not just anyone can pop in without a good reason. Plus its in the mountains. At LEAST make some excuse for your characters (and please name them) to be there. Anything I'm missing Luv?))
 
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((After a considerable amount of thought, I have come to realize that mmas2 is a lost cause. Although it has, by far, outlived the original. However, for those who wish to continue the legacy, I grant Searchingsoul permission to take charge of this thread, or, out of respect for the mmas2 legacy, start fresh with a mmas3 *hinthint*. I bid thee adieu!))
 
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