Please check out my Wife's song

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I kept thinking it was gonna turn into a screamo song. If your wife did that, and then dropped into that midway through the song, this would be a favorite!

Unfortunately, I felt this missed the mark. The sounds used do not fit her voice when it picks up. She has a great voice, but the sounds clashed. That guitar needed to be deeper and lower, as she has a high voice and gets muffled by the guitar. With a few tweaks here and there, I think this could have a great sound and be a great song!
 
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I liked it because it was authentic, a great recording, great musicianship, and a great voice! (Is that you playing the guitar?)

Areas that could improve in my own opinion!
I think the mixing needs a little improvement if you are looking for more of a commercial kick. Other than that I find it to be a very good recording that is very good musically.
 
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