Withgreatmercy,rhymes with Kate!!!!!!!! (5)

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shakingthedustoffmyfeet said:
This morn from slumber I woke from a dream
Took a trip down south to straighten a thing.
I rolled into town, entered a back door
Had never been inside this place before.

Narrow, winding hallways led me along
Destiny would bring my hurt heart a song.
The walls weren’t so dark, nor really that bright
The color was beige on both of my sides.

The floor was sort of like that color too,
just a different shade, all the way through.
My heart raced a little, I sensed the end
Soon I would get to hug my dear, sweet friend.

End of the hall, a door in front of me
I opened the door to reach my destiny.
The place was more like a person’s garage
Nothing fancy like a pretty mirage.

Bob was there working, some project of his
Stunned to see me in Florida like this.
He had his friends there admiring his work
But all I could think was, “Kathy’s heart hurts!”


He told me where you were back down the hall
This was weird, I’m at your house after all.
Afraid to go to her, don’t want her mad
She’s one of the best friends I ever had.

And the real fact is, my heart aches for her
Because I know that her pain is for sure.
She has been burned so very, very deep
So much pain in her life has cost her sleep.

Wanted to show her the depths of my love
But didn’t want to push my sweet, sweet dove.
Before I could say, “Don’t know what to do!”
Sensed someone behind me, turned to see you.

Embraced you with love to show you my pain
Embraced you with love, ‘cause you are my friend.
We cried as we hugged, there in that odd room.
I cry as I type, tears from my own gloom.
So very nice....So touching..........I like it...:clap:.
 
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shakingthedustoffmyfeet said:
Yes, I like the poem too. It was written by someone I love like a brother. Beautiful poem.

I checked this thread to see if it is closed yet. I have requested several times that it be closed. Good to see everyone, though. I did not expect this.


Expect this unexpected surprise.;) Will be glad when this thread is closed....
 
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And now can I finish the dream for you?
Down there you went oh this is so true!
But evil designs were dancing in your head!
Because true love in your heart was surely dead!
The one you called friend you stabbed in the back!
Cause true love for her was what you did lack!
The mess you started for jealousies rage!
You tried your best to put others in a cage!
But jusdgement is sure to come to you!
I pray you find God before it is through!
 
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blessedvalley said:
And now can I finish the dream for you?
Down there you went oh this is so true!
But evil designs were dancing in your head!
Because true love in your heart was surely dead!
The one you called friend you stabbed in the back!
Cause true love for her was what you did lack!
The mess you started for jealousies rage!
You tried your best to put others in a cage!
But jusdgement is sure to come to you!
I pray you find God before it is through!

No need for anyone to be jealous. Plenty enough love to go around for all our brothers and sisters.:hug:
 
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blessedvalley said:
And now can I finish the dream for you?
Down there you went oh this is so true!
But evil designs were dancing in your head!
Because true love in your heart was surely dead!
The one you called friend you stabbed in the back!
Cause true love for her was what you did lack!
The mess you started for jealousies rage!
You tried your best to put others in a cage!
But jusdgement is sure to come to you!
I pray you find God before it is through!

Amen, brother, those words are very wise indeed. :)
 
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shakingthedustoffmyfeet said:
This morn from slumber I woke from a dream
Took a trip down south to straighten a thing.
I rolled into town, entered a back door
Had never been inside this place before.

Narrow, winding hallways led me along
Destiny would bring my hurt heart a song.
The walls weren’t so dark, nor really that bright
The color was beige on both of my sides.

The floor was sort of like that color too,
just a different shade, all the way through.
My heart raced a little, I sensed the end
Soon I would get to hug my dear, sweet friend.

End of the hall, a door in front of me
I opened the door to reach my destiny.
The place was more like a person’s garage
Nothing fancy like a pretty mirage.

Bob was there working, some project of his
Stunned to see me in Florida like this.
He had his friends there admiring his work
But all I could think was, “Kathy’s heart hurts!”


He told me where you were back down the hall
This was weird, I’m at your house after all.
Afraid to go to her, don’t want her mad
She’s one of the best friends I ever had.

And the real fact is, my heart aches for her
Because I know that her pain is for sure.
She has been burned so very, very deep
So much pain in her life has cost her sleep.

Wanted to show her the depths of my love
But didn’t want to push my sweet, sweet dove.
Before I could say, “Don’t know what to do!”
Sensed someone behind me, turned to see you.

Embraced you with love to show you my pain
Embraced you with love, ‘cause you are my friend.
We cried as we hugged, there in that odd room.
I cry as I type, tears from my own gloom.

a broken heart is the worst kind of pain...:hug:

good to see you...:hug:
 
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