Ode to my Cats

What do you think of my ode's?

  • Cute!

  • Um, needs work...

  • Puh-leeze!

  • Best thing I ever read, no really!


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RNwannabe

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Okay I love cats! I had posted this on another forum, and wanted to post it here.

I am not guaranteeing it is very good, I was just in a weird mood one night, and couldnt sleep. These came from me watching my cats pounce around that night.

I hope you enjoy. :D

My Murph:
Perched upon the window sill,
what is that you see?
Are you peering at your reflection,
or staring back at me?



Little Oly:
She looks so prim, and proper as can be,
until she feels the bite of that blasted flea!
She pounces into action,
claws digging, teeth biting.
Until the terror subsides.
Then she rests with paws outstretched,
towards the star filled sky.


Precious Petrie:
Was that a whisper or a mew?
I swear sometimes you can talk!
You sing your song of quiet grace,
while the frenzied world flies on.



Dearest Noah:
Pink paws
Black nose
Yellow eyes
Hidden woes.


I decided to try to add a poll. I would appreciate any feedback. And yes I even accept Constructive critizism...as long as its just that...constructive. ;)