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Ariadne shrugged Petra's worrisome explosion off like it was nothing. "You got a paragraph done? Not bad. Your topic is kind of difficult." Glancing around the table at the preoccupied parties, she leaned closer to the girl. "If you can figure out a way to get us out of here, there may still be...

Breaking into her thoughts, Ariadne looked up from her soup at the girl. A small smile formed, as if knowing what was coming next. Petra would ask her for help on her assignment. And, of course, Ariadne would help her. Being the only two girls among the boys, they had been close as sisters for...

Ariadne recognized Petra's panicked look, and even felt bad that there wouldn't be enough time for her to save the girl like she had in the past. But their Nan had Ariadne's attention with the punishment of extra chores. A sour look spoiled her face as she ripped a piece of bread viciously in...

Also, I lovethe idea of Alyssa! You don't have to reveal her to us til you want!

I wish I could like these posts... Lol!! Everything sounds really good! And, sorry for taking your Ariadne, Matt lol! What's she like? Because I'm so rusty with character descriptions (I barely describe my characters in my story), I haven't done much of one, but I suppose I could start not :)...

Speech of the horseman's arrival piqued Ariadne's attention. Horseman with a beard? She could only imagine how he might look in, but if it wasn't for the Keeper's arrival, she would have asked more about him. She laughed at the Keeper's fond talk of Maurus. "Truly, extra chores may not work if...

Apathy setting in... I'll just delete and repost it when we get there. I have nothing to say other than "She walked to the dining room."

Also, WHERE IS SYLVEN

Ok, just reread my post. I went right to sitting because a description of Ariadne walking to the table was unnecessary writing garbage in my head.

I must have misread... Everyone else was interacting And it sounded like we were there already... My bad. Want me to fix?

That is EXACTLY how I feel when I read your work, lol! You all push me to compete with you ;)

Ariadne walked to the dining room.

Lol you guys crack me up :)

Psh, as if you can't crank out quality work... You could sneeze on the keys and have half a sonnet :P lol

Gasp :o