Recent content by Dee

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    Limericks!

    Hey Everyone, these are really funny, my contribution is below this message. It seems that old Mrs. Keating wore her new set of teeth to a meeting. They got the best laugh, now they set in a glass and smile at her while she is eating.
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    Haiku anyone?

    oncewaslost. Sure you can write Haiku. All it takes is a little practice. Pick a subject, nature is a good one to start with. Find words that total 5 syllables Sun shining brightly Sun (1syllable) shining (2syllables) brightly (2sylables) total of five syllables for first line...
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    Haiku anyone?

    berlo06. you are right of course, there are many forms of Haiku. I have a poet friend who won a national Haiku contest and won a trip to Japan. The syllable count of the Japanese language are so much different from ours, thus numerous forms of Haiku. I agree with you however, that the 5-7-5...
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    Happy Valentines Day

    Happy Valentine's Day! If you have a heart to give away try giving it to Jesus today! NO ONE will ever love you like He does! Dee
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    My Mirror

    Josephus, what a unique thought! The mirror of our heart should relfect the Savior's love, this poem tells me yours does. Dee
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    My Poem, comments please

    Crazy4Christ, You have done a good job here with your imagery, but especially your message, that nothing is going to come between you and your Lord. For those that love poetry, it does not necessarily have to rhyme, this is a free verse poem. What makes it different from prose? It is the...
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    Haiku anyone?

    Stogus Maximus, change, It is, to it's in the second line and you have done a Haiku. Will check out your limerick thread. Dee
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    Haiku anyone?

    Lamb's Love, a fine Haiku senquence, great job!
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    Haiku anyone?

    Miz Doulos, that is a wonderful Haiku! I love it. Dee
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    Poem about the Cross

    Laura, this is great good rhythm, good flow. You may want to check the 4th line and re-edit, it says when you deeper within, I think perhaps you meant to say, when you dig deeper within, am I right about that? Or you could say when "you're" deeper within, there just seems to be a word...
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    angel

    Hi Andilynn, this is a lovely sonnet, and wonderful tribute to your cousin. I hope you shared it with your family. I have a friend who just lost a day old little boy on Feb. 5th, so reading this was most memorable for me. Dee
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    Haiku anyone?

    Faith of a mustard seed Paul writing from prison cell Epistles of love! I love studying Paul's Epistles, and I am inspired by his commitment to the Lord. He makes a path that we as Christians would do well to follow. Dee
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    There Goes My Jesus

    Roberta, Rnwannabe, oncewaslost, and AnGelBLUE, thank you so very much for your wonderful comments on, "There Goes My Jesus". I write a lot of Christian poems and share them with my church family, and at our services. This was one that was especially liked , so I thought I would share it with...
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    There Goes My Jesus

    There goes my Jesus, climbing the hill, bearing the cross, in His Father's will. Precious brow bleeding, punctured by thorns, burdened by my sins, alone and forlorn. There goes my Jesus, nailed to a cross, praying for mercy for all who are lost. Bruised and afflicted, weary, alone spat...
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    The Face of Grace

    There goes my Jesus climbing the hill, bearing the cross, in His father's will. Precious brow bleeding, punctured by thorns, burdened by my sins, alone and forlorn. There goes my Jesus nailed to the cross, praying for mercy for all who are lost. Bruised and afflicted, weary, alone spat...