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I might as well continue the humiliation. I finished this one today. Actually like an hour ago.
YouTube - Serenity
YouTube - Serenity
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Edwards1984
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Very nice. Although it seems a little mellow and sad - I dunno if I would call it "Serenity"
The truth comes out...
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Very nice. Although it seems a little mellow and sad - I dunno if I would call it "Serenity"
lol thats actually kinda weird.. I was actually going for a tranquil feeling but apparently it sounds sad. I need to rename it I guess - any suggestions?
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I quite liked that, maybe not Serenity though, more of a tranquillity.
I think the cello gives it a depth and stillness that doesn't quite catch the lighter calmness of serenity.
Edit: I hadn't seen you mention tranquil in the post above. Honest.
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thanks, such lovely comments
Naming the pieces isn't my favourite part. Nothing ever seems right to me. If it were actually feasable to name them all "untitled" and still somehow organize which song was which, I would
maybe thats a sign I should rename it to Tranquility?
Naming the pieces isn't my favourite part. Nothing ever seems right to me. If it were actually feasable to name them all "untitled" and still somehow organize which song was which, I would
maybe thats a sign I should rename it to Tranquility?
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What about Waiting or Waiting, Watching.
and are you able to extend the final notes of the cello and... is it a viola? just to allow the music to fade a little more, it's a little too abrupt.
and are you able to extend the final notes of the cello and... is it a viola? just to allow the music to fade a little more, it's a little too abrupt.
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yeah it actually does last longer, but youtube cut it off for some reason. I'll fix it tomorrow.
good suggestions
good suggestions
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hm. apparently I can't edit it. For some reason the score never was saved yesterday, so I'd have to rewrite almost the whole thing to change a couple of notes I did rename it though. And sorry I just realized I ignored your question. yeah... its supposed to be a viola.
I did rename it though. And sorry I just realized I ignored your question. yeah... its supposed to be a viola.
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hm. apparently I can't edit it. For some reason the score never was saved yesterday, so I'd have to rewrite almost the whole thing to change a couple of notes
So it'll be like your little masterpiece that could never be fixed, like your personal Magnificent Ambersons.
Or...just recreate it I suppose.
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I don't know if the real artists will accept mere words here but this song popped into my head earlier today. It's a little rough, and I only have a bare tune in my head for it, but anyway.
Days of dark grey / Nights of cold rain
Thinking of you / Brings me to pain
I walk to the shore / And look out to sea
The storm tossed waves / Remind me of me.
ch.
That churning inside / From the things I’ve done wrong
Feelings pent up / So I’m writing this song
To express how I feel / Without saying your name
It’s what I must do / To avoid causing shame
I offered no patience / Instead tried to charm
You feared for the worst / I caused you that harm
A safe harbour I / Or so it would seem
Yet from below / This change would be seen
ch.
I pushed you too hard / When I gave into dread
My heart flew too high / And now I’ve burnt my bed
I asked more than you gave / You turned me aside
My heart crashed and burned / And part of me died
ch.
It’s been so long / Since I heard your voice
The decision was yours / You gave me no choice
A personal word / Would have given me hope
But fears and doubt / Makes a slippery slope
ch.
The future goes on / Of that I am sure
You’ll find love again / When you’re ready once more
I look to the sky / To see for my own
Clouds one day will clear / To light the way home
ch.
Days of dark grey / Nights of cold rain
Thinking of you / Brings me to pain
I walk to the shore / And look out to sea
The storm tossed waves / Remind me of me.
ch.
That churning inside / From the things I’ve done wrong
Feelings pent up / So I’m writing this song
To express how I feel / Without saying your name
It’s what I must do / To avoid causing shame
I offered no patience / Instead tried to charm
You feared for the worst / I caused you that harm
A safe harbour I / Or so it would seem
Yet from below / This change would be seen
ch.
I pushed you too hard / When I gave into dread
My heart flew too high / And now I’ve burnt my bed
I asked more than you gave / You turned me aside
My heart crashed and burned / And part of me died
ch.
It’s been so long / Since I heard your voice
The decision was yours / You gave me no choice
A personal word / Would have given me hope
But fears and doubt / Makes a slippery slope
ch.
The future goes on / Of that I am sure
You’ll find love again / When you’re ready once more
I look to the sky / To see for my own
Clouds one day will clear / To light the way home
ch.
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Eh. I'm not so much a fan of it at the moment. I should have put more than 10 minutes worth of effort into it.
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