spread fate through story, help

hello how ya'll doing? yes i would like to help in the salvtion plan, promoteing christ. if i post this in the wrong forum for give me
i new here.

ok i get straight to the point, i want to make a animated story
about how one can live a holy life in JESUS name. i want the series to show easy realistic ways to follow the lord, talk about scriptures in a way that get the viewers to read the bible and more importantly see the righteous that is Christ. don't worry i will handy the animation and artwork, i just need help thinking up a story. story type i gunning for is the situtional. kind like how the simpson is, a series of un or fairly related events happens to the main characters while not changing the main charcters too much(maybe way of thinking but not something like lifesytle)
so far i got

guy 1 (let name him jerry) he a 39 year old male who encounter alot of drugs, sex, violence, hate, and other wicked things. he a mildly angry person who work a dead end job. he find out that all his troubles are base on his lifestye, porn, hate, selfish was to blame. he then pray to GOd and over the course of a few weeks his life becomes better. that the back story the present would be him countine to grow in sprit.

guy2(damon) 16 year old just starting out as a christian
not to much back story.

yeah how can i make this more intresting?

Hey mr.sawlock,

Your ideas sounded pretty good. I think there is a creativity/hobbies section on the forum, you may want to repost this there as the more creatively-inclined people should be there.

Heh, sounds like my life, though I'm still waiting for the part about where life becomes better. lol.

Some ideas for Jerry: Arrested? Couldn't go through with/attempted susicide? Sentenced to work with less-fortunate and/or down-and-outers? Friend gets seriously injured in a car accident? I dunno, creativity never really was my thing. Good luck none-the-less bro.

As for Damon, try to think about issues that may have plauged you as a new Christian, or even now. Feeling lonely, abandoned by God, questioning, and through some circumstance he learns some lesson or something more about God. Often times, God works through other people when we interact with them. The backstory depends largely on who you're trying to reach. It's been some time since I was 16 years old...

Like I said, creativity is not my strength. Best wishes with your endeavours.