(( NOTE TO ALL READERS: Since I currently have 8 people(11/12 characters), I'm going to have to ask no others to join us right now. I did not know so many people would be interested in this story. I may make an exception (as there always are) for 1 or 2 people if you really like where our story is going. Any who read are welcome to post a comment on our story! But please, if you don't like the story, then just don't read it instead of leaving a hate message. Thank you!
BG peeps:
Hey guys! I'm going to start my story with Angeline's death. Maximumride, since you have an Emir character, I'll just use Inkutsu as a side character. Let me know if you want Narien to already know him or something. They will be the only 2 Emir in existience right now.
Ok, my next post will be Angeline's story. Thanks to all who read this and all you guys who have join in with us! Thanks too for all the get wells. I'm much better, thank you! ))
__________________ Life is a road you travel on; Soon enough, it will be gone. You never know you will come across. Don't make friends into enemies, that would be a great loss. If, one day you find yourself in frightful land, you call out for help and nobody stands.
You feel alone, knowing you shouldn't of been so cold.
Then, in the far reaches of your view, a figure walks towards you. A shallow breath you drew. As he comes closer, tears start to flow. God lifts your lowered head and says, "A True Friend, I Am."
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((Angeline’s thoughts are very informal English typing/grammar because this are in her head. Thoughts are in italics))
Angeline sat in the alley behind her school on some of the crates that the cafeteria had left out with her arms behind her head, trying to catch a nap. She suddenly heard the Vice Principle calling her name though the outdoor PA system telling her to report to the principle’s office immediately or be suspended.
‘Dang,’ She thought, ‘that old geezer just don’t quit.’ She looked up in the sky as she thought about what she wanted to do that day and sighed as, once again, she felt no motivation to do anything. ‘Maybe there’ll be more punks after the prison breaks for the day.’ By prison, Angeline was referring to the school because that’s exactly what it use to be. Then some smart-aleck went and got the most obnoxious idea to turning it into a school. ‘What a place!’ She thought sarcastically, ‘Still with the bars on the windows and 12 foot high chain fence. So warm and welcoming, just like the staff."
Angeline reflected on how all the teachers and ‘faculty’ looked at her with disgust and contempt. ‘I don’t wanna be here anyway. Why do they insisted I be here when we’re all better off when I’m not. Like anyone cares.’ She turned to look out across the courtyard behind the school that let into the city park and considered taking a walk and just leaving for the day.
Meanwhile, across the Border of Heaven:
‘Excuse me, Sir?’ said a high pitch voice. Daniel sighed for the umptieth time that day. "What is it, Narissa?" He asked, not even looking up from the pile of latest files on hopeful souls awaiting the word on if they were coming to heaven or not and if so, where they would be placed. He assigned the current one open as a possible guardian spirit, though all final decision were up to Lord God.
‘These files for the corrupt file, so many Sir?" Narissa looked at him startled, holding a pile of 32 files of living people he had found to be vilely filled with such personalities that he had to reject before they had even passed on.
"Yes, Narissa. They are just too fowl for a second chance."
Narissa lifted one stuffed file with a surprised look, "But this one, she's so young! Couldn't she possibly be assigned a guardian angel?"
"No Narissa, just look at the thickness of that file! She disregards any form of authority!" Daniel sighed and turned back down to his paperwork, "Please just take them down, Narissa."
‘Yes, Sir.’ Narissa sighed.
Daniel continued working as she walked away, ‘That human girl has so much potential. She’s just too stubborn to realize it!’ Daniel looked up in the direction Narissa took the files. "Well maybe we can give her another chance in 34 years. She’s only got that long."
On Earth
Angeline walked through the trees off the park path. She sighed as she looked up at the sun spots dancing though the rustling leaves. "Guess I could hit the arcade and bust the high scores..again." She continued walking for a time before coming to a chain link fence and a low brick wall that lined a sidewalk to a street. She grabbed the fence and swung herself over before stepping over the brick wall and walking across the street to the arcade. Angeline went inside, intending on losing herself in the virtual world for a few hours.
((Ok, next post is her 'passing on' and meeting a very surprised Daniel. I'm sorry this took so long guys. Now that summer is really here, I'll be able to post everyday. The rest should be up tonight or tomorrow morning. Feel free to post any one of your stories! You don't have to wait for me to finish unless you just want to hop into meeting together.))
__________________ Life is a road you travel on; Soon enough, it will be gone. You never know you will come across. Don't make friends into enemies, that would be a great loss. If, one day you find yourself in frightful land, you call out for help and nobody stands.
You feel alone, knowing you shouldn't of been so cold.
Then, in the far reaches of your view, a figure walks towards you. A shallow breath you drew. As he comes closer, tears start to flow. God lifts your lowered head and says, "A True Friend, I Am."
Will Sapp just finished his last class at a community college. As he was approaching his car, he heard a woman screaming. So he ran over to see what was happening. And there was a woman struggling with a man.
"Let me go!" she says.
"I'll hold you anyway I want to!" he replied.
"Hey!" Will yelled. "Let her go!"
The man cursed and pulled out a knife. "Mind your own business, idiot!"
"Are you okay?" Will asked the woman.
"She's my girl!" the man yelled. "Mind your own business!"
The man attacked. Will dodged the knife and punched the man in the gut, sending the man flying in the opposite direction.
Will surprised himself. And apparently, he surprised the woman as well. She looked at him like she was afraid of him.
"Are you okay?" Will asked.
"Don't touch me!" she screamed. Then she ran away.
Will turned around and walked back to his car, confused by what just happened. He pulled out his keys, but they seemed to just slip out of his hands. He bend down to reach for them, and he noticed something odd. His fingers seemed to have grown longer, and his nails became sharp and jet black.
What the?
As he pulled himself up, he caught a glimpse of himself in the car window. He could have sworn he saw some kind of monster over his reflection, but it was gone in a flash. He looked back at his hand, and it was back to normal again.
"Wierd," he said. "...I must be tired. I'm imagining things."
__________________ "We may not know what the future holds, but we do know Who holds the future."
Andrew Shale looked about himself from his seat in the bar. Drunken laughter drifted to his ears and the smell of alcohol was strong in the air. A group of teens, obviously too young to drink, were sitting about a circular table, laughing as they drank. Andrew himself had nothing, preferring to sit at a small table in the corner of the bar, where the laughter was muffled and the cigarette smoke thinned.
Humans are such pathetic creatures, he thought. One little spark, and their entire world goes up in flames.And after the destruction, only the strong and worthy survive.
A sadistic smile then lit up his face. Perhaps that's what it takes, the flames of Hael to purify and temper a weak world.
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Narien soared above the city, manipulating the wind currents to do so. Looking down at all the oblivious people without a care in the world, or any idea about the unseen world just out of their reach. But she had no time to think about them now, something was going down on the outskirts of the city and she wasn't about to miss it.
__________________ "You've forgotten one thing... I'm Brilliant!!" - Doctor Who (as played by David Tennant) Teenagers are God's revenge on mankind. It's as if he looked down and said, "Let's see how they like to make someone in their own image who deny's their existance." -Jeff Alan
"If Thomas Hunter can change history then I think I have the right to change a few words!!" -Gabil
((Sorry I haven't been around. Went to camp this week.))
Kimmy Rose sat on the lower bunk in her cell. The Inmate on the bunk above her snored loudly. The bed squeaked as she got up, and she paused to make sure she didn't wake her. She walked over to the window, and began thinking over her life of jumping from fosterhome to fosterhome. Tears filled her eyes and she started sobbing uncontrollably.
"Hey, I'm sleepin' over here! So stop your cryin' and let me get my beauty sleep" Shouted her cellmate. She cursed under her breath then went back to sleep.
Kimmy took a deep breath. She looked back out the window and saw something. It was like two red glowing eyes. She blinked and they were gone. She looked closer pressing her nose against the bullet proof glass. When she was sure she didn't see anything out there she went back to her bunk and fell asleep to dreams of monsters and eerie red eyes peering out of the darkness.
__________________ Remember that God loves you always in the low moments and in the good days, when you're buried in guilt and sin and when you are on the top of your game. He loves you unconditionally, and no matter what you do, where you go, or what you say; His love will remain the same.
Isn't that Amazing? ~JLT
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Lystra soared through the clouds around her, feeling their cool brush against her wings and her face. She never got used to the feeling of freedom flying gave her, and was confident she never would. It was just one more thing God had done for her, and it made her smile every time she stretched her lush feathered wings and watched the hidden gold flecks sparkle from the eternal light that permeated every surface on Heaven.
Now she sang as she flew, thanking God for the life He'd given her after her human one was over and for Daniel, one of her friends she'd made in Heaven. He was quite a bit older than her, and so perfect for all her questions which now had someone who knew what was going on to answer them. Of course Lystra talked to God as well, but Daniel was kind of like Lystra's guardian angel after Earth. An angel with a guardian angel. Lystra smiled at the thought as she flew.
As she swung a lazy loop through the air, something that hung around Lystra's neck fell against her cheek. Lystra brushed her hand against it and a vaugely troubled feeling crept into her.
Lystra rubbed the little necklace charm with her thumb, and the tiny ruby winked up at her. The necklace her little sister Katsa had given to her two nights before Lystra had left Earth was the only thing she'd kept past the Gates. Lately, every time she saw it, something like foreboding drifted through her. She'd hoped the feelings would go away, but after this long...suddenly she felt compelled to go find Daniel and ask him about it.
"Alright, I'll go find him." Lystra said to her Father, who had to have put the feeling in her. She flexed her wings and started toward Daniel's office.
When Will woke up the next morning, the events of the previous night had disappeared to the back of his mind. However, waiting for class to begin, one of the students said something that caught Will's attention.
"Did you hear about those monster sightings recently?" said the student.
"What?" replied another student. "Don't tell me you believe that junk. There's no way.
"About a dozen different witnesses have already claimed to have been attacked by this monster. These people had real injuries, and some of them died. One victim was interviewed on the Morning Show this morning."
"Wow. That's really creepy."
"What did they say this monster looked like?" Will asked.
"Umm... They say it's human shaped. Black wings, black hair. I think they said it had a few horns on its head. They also said it has the strength of several men."
Will jumped out of his seat and rushed into the bathroom. "It couldn't be me, could it? No. I haven't blanked out or woken up in any strange places. It couldn't be me. It must just be a coincidence.
"But last night wouldn't be the first wierd thing that's happened. What about my eyes? They sparkle red in the dark. My mom says it's a rare eye condition. Was she lying?
"No way. Why am I even thinking about this? There's no such thing as monsters. They've never existed before, and they don't exist now."
__________________ "We may not know what the future holds, but we do know Who holds the future."
Apollyon grinned at the sight of the burning wreckage. More people stared in amazement at the burning building, and let out a sound of surprise as the roof collapsed and sent a column of fire high into the air. People were running everywhere and the sound of screaming brought a smile to his face. So great was the chaos that no one saw the giant winged figure high above on another building, his large, golden feathered wings spread spread wide and exulting in the glory of his power.
An evil smile crossed his face as thoughts crossed his mind. The few people that had survived his fire, they would be made stronger by the incident. But the world needed to be consumed by this fire, this purifying flame. Only then could he reveal his nature, to a stronger world, his world.
With one beat of his powerful wings Apollyon rose into the air, circling several times before flying away from his flaming masterpiece.
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Narien awoke with a start in an ally on the edge of the city. What happened last night? she thought t herself. Something went wrong, but I can't remember what that something is. Someone must be planning something very dangerous, someone from home.
__________________ "You've forgotten one thing... I'm Brilliant!!" - Doctor Who (as played by David Tennant) Teenagers are God's revenge on mankind. It's as if he looked down and said, "Let's see how they like to make someone in their own image who deny's their existance." -Jeff Alan
"If Thomas Hunter can change history then I think I have the right to change a few words!!" -Gabil
I'm going to start my story with Angeline's death. Maximumride, since you have an Emir character, I'll just use Inkutsu as a side character. Let me know if you want Narien to already know him or something. They will be the only 2 Emir in existience right now. 
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