The Sowers Seed

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Twilight and shadows.

I don't want your twilight love tonight. I want your whole heart full of love. Arise my love my fair one and come away with me.

We will plow through any shadows we see ; on our way to Mercury fly high with me we will see what we will see.

Flying over the deep blue sea futher up then we can possibly be. Flying along on a dying prairie. Smelling the sage and dead cattle. Rattlesnakes abound looking on the ground , you are a bright shining fairy, flying without a sound now homeward bound. I love you.

Into the twilight we go looking for something we know. flying over houses and the city below , listening for the late night buzz of city life we know. Ready with our throwing knife, our throwing stars in pockets deep flying over houses with people asleep . We go to and fro looking for those things and people we know. In shadows deep we find culture in rare form for this city, a hobo camp on the edge of town only visible from above packed with people who are in love with life and its many twists and turns. We descend for a cup of hobo coffee.

Hail and well met, we drink our coffee in peace after you my love have given a speech. The youngest hobo serves a cup to each. Time passes well I hardly notice the smell. It's the forth hour of the night some hobos begin to trickle in from the night seeking shelter from the cold. I hold your hand there is no more reason to be here, just watching hobos enjoying their meal. Farewell we say then on our way, to see what can be seen in this day. We take to the sky's again on our way home this time ignoring any petty crime unless we just want to have fun. Time for sleep to wait again for the sun.

I really love the twilight the best time of night. My cat too, here at home with you, imagine that. Harry is the name of our cat.

Come on dear let the cat take care of the dying embers. Come over here kissy face. Time for bed and a very goodnight to all.
 
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Lucid enchantment.


You enchanted me with your holy, bone tingling fright. I'm amazed by your clear overtures that knocked me for a spin tonight. I at the very start thought her an angel frightful and tall. Inside I felt so small. With a belt of whisky in me for a shot of courage, I walked up to you. Now I belong to you and you belong to me in my sweet heart. You put my fears to rest with a twinkle in your eye then you gave me a wink, I could not speak. For you are an enchantress your white lace and gold have captivated my heart. Right from the start in our conversation. She drank champagne, and for a long time she had no name. We spared and dalleyed with each other I then learned she attended my church and had wanted me from afar for a long time. We talked about me it was my dime. We talked and drank til closing time. I was walking so she gave me a lift she allowed me one kiss at the door. Her name was Lena and I am in love; all because of her bewitching lucid enchantment.
 
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The mirror pool.

Still waters filled up with fresh rain. I see my face I see the pain. Maybe I need to explain. She left me yesterday she told me in a gentle way. Its a sunny day but a black one for me just look at my face and you can see. I've left the human race , it makes no sense to me now. How do I cope is there a friend I can take counsel from. I feel like drinking a whole bottle of rum. The still waters ripple it must be my tears, how dumb. This tells me I guess I did give her my heart. Life is an art , I guess I need to learn what is my part. I feel no need right now. How about the vow we made to be steady to each other , together never again. How will we meet which I'm sure we will. I will look at her with longing and ask her for another day ,which I'm sure she will say no too me in her nice and gentle way. The mirror pool is telling all this to me but it can be wrong you see , oh woe is me. The mirror pool gets the last word and that word is very very positive that word is , YES
 
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Oden's dream.

Starfish in the deep blue sea, splashing mermaids to and fro. Giant water dragons breathing fire. Near the cities of Sidon and Tyre. Lifting his gaze out of the briny mire. Higher and higher to his throne room in the sky. He looks at his kingdom and trusted servents numbering in the thousands. Seeing the armies below he casts firey lightning bolts on the foe. Enjoying himself emensely he begins to laugh. Now playing with lion and Girraff he roams the earth , taking a bath in mineral pools in the depths of mountian's deep. feeling so peaceful he begains to weep remembering old days of glory now gone forever. Never to return as long as Yaweh decides, alas no man or God knows that day. Suddenly God appears "I will tell you when the time for the end is to come. When my gospel is spread throughout the whole earth then will be the end." Now his sleep is dreamless and he moves as day begins anew. "Wake up" says Herra his wife. "Yes my dear I am awake and had the dream of my life. I will cause Christianity to spread and florish then surly the end of all things will come to be." "Ok my dear you do that. Oden's dream shall be sacred and hallowed forever."
 
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Dark quiet pond.

It was a dark quiet pond twice as big as a very large mud puddle. Twice as big as a football huddle. Dark water even in the morning light. Perfect for contemplation exactly right. Looking to me like a rounded rectangle. I have sat beside it many times and cleared my mind. I helps me unwind. There is a peace I find on this sitting log someone must have rolled it here to this place just to bring a smile to my face. I pray to God here on this log he hears me even through this muddled bog that is my mind. My God is absolutely kind he made me this beautiful spring fed pond. It sooths me here and will be there in spirit in the great beyond. I'm quite fond of this pond.
 
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Reign and chaos.

Take us beyond our faces kick it apart kick the whole world apart. In glorious aftermath we shall reign with our heart not our mind ,so unkind. Back to nature and tents at last the pain relents; our country has gone too far with money sucking housing and expensive food. Everyone was so rude. Our ways may be crude but we respect each other brother to brother. Those who reigned were so impotent and gutless to make real change. Our day has come and forever will remain. At last a doctor can practice without fear of malpractice charges. We give him food and treat him well. And at the dinner bell we have lots of friends, no Normies allowed quite a crowd everyone brings something to add to our repast. Now we pray to God the real one who will last He gave us the victory we number in the millions including our children. Our future will be the same we are like our Indian brothers living off the land. So hand in hand we understand ours will be a simple life free from complication and strife.
 
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Endless river.

From the far away spring and the melting snow comes this majestic unstoppable flow mighty river roll on forever. never to slow steady and powerful endless going to the sea then evaporating into the sky and coming down as rain.
 
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My darling has a summer parasol playfully twirling it 'round. She walks on with a youthful bound holding on to a starfish she has found. She hands me her prize I'm surprised by the twinkle in her eyes. Her angelic face smiles at mine.
 
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Heart aflame

Why do I love you what did you do to me. Is it just me, no that's plain to see. You look at me with those eyes, a look that has no lies,open to loves sweet song deving right from wrong. I can't lie to you ,you always see right through. Honest and sweet the kindest soul you'd ever want to meet. Playing around your soft pale face. Oh grace me with your pretty eyes again. I want to melt again into a pool of love. Happy once again.
 
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Cultivated soul

It's too late I became educated. I can't go back I learned to like the better things in life. Perhaps it is a curse to always long for more and satisfied with only the best. Second best is ok and I live with it but I have a cultivated soul and that's where I am always. Sometimes I do get sick of only good things and then second best , more raw and edgy is needed. Defeated all my loves of when I was just a skinny lad and loved just what I had and didn't know any more. A bore is what I appear to be 'cuz I don't like Rap music and beer. Queer, Dom Parigion and Queen and the Black Crows are some of my likes. Don't like Eminem and Budwiser or Mcdonalds. Bach and Motzart really turn me on but only their best. Love steak and lobster bullibase and crepes these are a few of my needs on this planet til Jesus comes. Til He comes I am right here having a good time. Love is my best obsession and I have given my heart many times. I love to be in love. Love is the ultimate delectable ambition I have found. Love is all you need to achieve a cultivated soul.
 
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Jesus is the Seed He gave us what we need. Shining star from up above full of intellect full of love supreme at the same time sent for the common man.
Beautiful. All we need.
When my seed hits the ground I cry aloud, " bless my precious seed, my Lord."
The prayer of one who tried with all his might to plant a seed of truth in another, hoping for it to sprout love, that he may find life.
The words come to me, leave the slop be free.
I love this phrase. Through Jesus we can be free from the imprisonment of sin.
But we have it, a new bread basket.
Very interesting. I never thought of the possibility.
Twilight and shadows.
There was a large amount of visualization in this poem. It was easy to picture the events moving through my mind.
Oden's dream.
Did you just mingle Nordic mythology with Christianity? That's certainly different. Even if there were gods, the Lord would still be in complete command of them. I like this poem, especially this part:
taking a bath in mineral pools in the depths of mountian's deep.
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Dark quiet pond.
Isn't it just wonderful to sit and contemplate deep matters? Beautiful poem.
Endless river.
Wow. You just made a poem about the water cycle.

All in all, you're quite gifted with poetry. Sometimes, the poems can be somewhat difficult to decipher, but that just shows how much meaning and subjectivity and soul lies within them. You've inspired me to start writing a lot more poetry. Thank you.
 
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